Both are great, but my personal preference is to 2... I like how in 1 the a is a bit more romantic, but in 2 I like how it follows the shape of the heart... tough decision, though. Both are great!
I think 2 is the best as well, although the letterform is nicer in 1, version 2 ties both letters and the heart together. Especially since it now also transitions into the + character.
Thanks guys! I was personally leaning more towards 1, but you're both right, the flow of 2 feels a lot smoother. I'll keep exploring with both, maybe ultimately let my friends who this is for decide. So glad to have some valuable feedback!
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What do we think, something like 1 or something like 2?
about 1 year ago
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Devon Henderson
Both are great, but my personal preference is to 2... I like how in 1 the a is a bit more romantic, but in 2 I like how it follows the shape of the heart... tough decision, though. Both are great!
about 1 year ago
I think 2 is the best as well, although the letterform is nicer in 1, version 2 ties both letters and the heart together. Especially since it now also transitions into the + character.
Good job!
about 1 year ago
Thanks guys! I was personally leaning more towards 1, but you're both right, the flow of 2 feels a lot smoother. I'll keep exploring with both, maybe ultimately let my friends who this is for decide. So glad to have some valuable feedback!
about 1 year ago
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Wedding Invites
by Dennis P Kramer
Got these invites in the mail from my friends who I designed it for. Sorry for iPhone photos, but was excited to show these off.
Edit: Better photos here: http://www.dennispkramer.com
11 months ago