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  1. Dennis P Kramer Dennis P Kramer

    What do we think, something like 1 or something like 2?

    about 1 year ago

  2. Pro Devon Henderson Devon Henderson

    Both are great, but my personal preference is to 2... I like how in 1 the a is a bit more romantic, but in 2 I like how it follows the shape of the heart... tough decision, though. Both are great!

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    about 1 year ago

  3. Arthur Reinders Folmer Arthur Reinders Folmer

    I think 2 is the best as well, although the letterform is nicer in 1, version 2 ties both letters and the heart together. Especially since it now also transitions into the + character.

    Good job!

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    about 1 year ago

  4. Dennis P Kramer Dennis P Kramer

    Thanks guys! I was personally leaning more towards 1, but you're both right, the flow of 2 feels a lot smoother. I'll keep exploring with both, maybe ultimately let my friends who this is for decide. So glad to have some valuable feedback!

    about 1 year ago

  5. Got these invites in the mail from my friends who I designed it for. Sorry for iPhone photos, but was excited to show these off.

    Edit: Better photos here: http://www.dennispkramer.com

    11 months ago

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