This is the third iteration. Adjusted the type so that the background shows through, removed the drop shadow from the clock and made some other small modifications. Does this work better? I'm not sure.
I prefer this one to the second iteration, but it really depends what kind of tone you're looking to set. This one is bright and poppy whereas the last one's texture makes it feel more melancholic.
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This is the third iteration. Adjusted the type so that the background shows through, removed the drop shadow from the clock and made some other small modifications. Does this work better? I'm not sure.
almost 2 years ago
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Sacha Greif
I like it. Reminds me of the Billings icon!
almost 2 years ago
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Brekk Bockrath
I prefer this one to the second iteration, but it really depends what kind of tone you're looking to set. This one is bright and poppy whereas the last one's texture makes it feel more melancholic.
almost 2 years ago
Very good point, Brekk. This is definitely a lot louder.
almost 2 years ago
I like the subtle "B" logo on the clock. really nice touch/
almost 2 years ago
Thank you, Roland.
almost 2 years ago
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Bjørn Endre Langeland
This looks great, I hope you'll release a wallpaper as well ;)
One thing though, I think you have some light source inconsistency with the highlight in the glass, and the shading to the left of the B.
almost 2 years ago
Bjørn, very good catch! I'll fix that in my next iteration. I'll also create a wallpaper.
Thanks for the feedback! :-)
almost 2 years ago
Love the colours on this version, although I really liked the texture on the last one too... :D
almost 2 years ago
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Brian White
Zing bang boom. Me likey!
almost 2 years ago
Danke, guys.
almost 2 years ago
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Simon H.
I liked the stronger texture/lighting on the previous one, but this is really good too!
over 1 year ago
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Tim Davies
It's a nice poster and the clock looks great. Although doesn't this clock actually go against the Bauhaus fundamental of function over form?
over 1 year ago
It's much cleaner.
over 1 year ago
Hi Tim,
no, it doesn't. This is inspired by a famous Bauhaus clock from the 20s.
over 1 year ago
the previous version looked more antique, I also preferred the black type. I'm just an old stick-in-the-mud.
over 1 year ago