Bauhaus.Clock

14 Responses

1. Maleika E. A.

   A Bauhaus poster I'm currently working on.

   almost 2 years ago

2. Pro Aurélien Foutoyet

   Really love the integration of the beige linear shape inside the word "Bauhaus", along the "A's". Well done !

   almost 2 years ago

3. Pro Tony Lane

   Hmm, I think I'd like it if "AUH" was knocked out of the beige stroke and picked up the background texture.

   almost 2 years ago

4. Maleika E. A.

   Thank you Auélien.

   Anthony, that is actually a very good point. I'll try that. Thanks.

   almost 2 years ago

5. Pro Morgan Jones

   Looking lovely. I agree with knocking out the "AUH" think that would make it.

   almost 2 years ago

6. Pro Tudor Munteanu

   Looks sweet!

   almost 2 years ago

7. Maleika E. A.

   Morgan, yes, will do. I actually did one last night but was too tired and deleted the revision again. I'll get to the changes soon and repost.

   Thanks a lot for the feedback. :)

   almost 2 years ago

8. 

   Bauhaus Clock (rebound) This is the third iteration. Adjusted the type so that the background shows through, removed the drop shadow from the clock and made some other small modific... August 29, 2010

   Rebound

   Bauhaus Clock (rebound)

   by Maleika E. A.

   This is the third iteration. Adjusted the type so that the background shows through, removed the drop shadow from the clock and made some other small modifications. Does this work better? I'm not sure.

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   almost 2 years ago

9. Pro Simon Foster

   I prefer this one but maybe with the AUH in the orange color? Nice work :)

   almost 2 years ago

10. Maleika E. A.

    Simon, yes. I do find that the black lettering has more impact. In my third iteration, due to the see-through effect, the background and text form a symbiosis and reduce the overall impact, I find.

    I'll try again though. Not giving up! :)

    Thanks a ton!

    almost 2 years ago

11. Pro Tony Lane

    The black lettering isn't correct with Bauahaus style work though. It doesn't look like it's part of the piece, it's almost as if you just placed it over an existing piece of work. I don't think the drop shadow works either, once again, it's not something that you'd find in art during this period. I think your rebound is getting closer to achieving a true Bauhaus style piece.

    almost 2 years ago

12. Maleika E. A.

    Thanks for the feedback, Anthony. You're right and I do realise this which is why both points have been corrected in the rebound.

    I'm still not quite happy with it, but I'll get there, eventually.

    almost 2 years ago

13. Pro Joshua Sortino

    This is eye candy!

    over 1 year ago

14. Pro James Bergen Plummer

    I love everything about this!

    over 1 year ago