looks interesting, but it looks not good. first of all take a look at the direction of guides http://www.box.com/shared/7f523c8ca3de3f442ba2 , another thing is letter's "o" tail is way too long and too big at the same. Letter "i" dot is not on the right place... these are main things i would change to make it better, because now it plays on my eyes as a candy effect, but lettering isn't good. Rokas, please, make it better, my son. you can disagree with me of course, but i say what i see. Maybe i am blind...who knows... :) great progress you are making on logoi'iiiinnng. Keep it on a good foot.
This is really eye catching, I like the style a lot. I see what @Deividas is saying about the direction of the letters, but I don't think it makes this not good. I think the beauty of this style of lettering is that you can have natural variations, everything doesn't have to be aligned precisely the same. I do agree about the 'i' dot though, it could move over to the right a little.
Wow @Deividas Deiv Graužinis . First of all I want to thank you for this nice comment. It's always great to get some constructive feedback from dribbblers. I agree with you about the 'i' but I'm not sure if these guides really work on this kind of logos. I mean the logo should look a bit raw. And the 'o'. Well it's the same size as all of the other letters, maybe it's some kind of illusion or something :) Thanks again for your comment mister, will do my best.
@Claire Coullon Thanks Claire, I'm always happy to see comments from typo master like you are. I agree with you that sometimes script logos should look 'natural' :)
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Just improving my skills :)
about 1 year ago
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Yossi Belkin
Damnnnnn the flow on this baby is incredible. Skills indeed.
about 1 year ago
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Ben Bate ⚒
Oh yes.
about 1 year ago
you did well on this one!
about 1 year ago
That's depressing me.
about 1 year ago
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Simon Ålander
Delicious type, @Rokas!
about 1 year ago
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Alen Type08 Pavlovic
I would only cut the curve below the C (like it's reaching from behind), the rest is peaches!
about 1 year ago
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Julius Seniūnas
woooho !
about 1 year ago
great!
about 1 year ago
This is really fucking gorgeous! *Drools*
about 1 year ago
@Yossi Belkin @Ben Bate @Coen van Hasselt @Simon Ålander @Alen Type08 Pavlovic @Julius Seniūnas @Alexander Sapelkin @Tom Ralston Thanks gents!! I'm really happy that you like this logo :) @Filip Pietroń no need to depress, I'm sure you'll be able to create something better than this :)
about 1 year ago
What the f...! :) this is massive!
about 1 year ago
Nice candy!
about 1 year ago
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Julius Seniūnas
even more tasty than Haribo
about 1 year ago
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Jan Vu Nam
That gradient. Is so engaging!
about 1 year ago
looks interesting, but it looks not good. first of all take a look at the direction of guides http://www.box.com/shared/7f523c8ca3de3f442ba2 , another thing is letter's "o" tail is way too long and too big at the same. Letter "i" dot is not on the right place... these are main things i would change to make it better, because now it plays on my eyes as a candy effect, but lettering isn't good. Rokas, please, make it better, my son. you can disagree with me of course, but i say what i see. Maybe i am blind...who knows... :) great progress you are making on logoi'iiiinnng. Keep it on a good foot.
about 1 year ago
This is really eye catching, I like the style a lot. I see what @Deividas is saying about the direction of the letters, but I don't think it makes this not good. I think the beauty of this style of lettering is that you can have natural variations, everything doesn't have to be aligned precisely the same. I do agree about the 'i' dot though, it could move over to the right a little.
about 1 year ago
Nice one.
about 1 year ago
Wow @Deividas Deiv Graužinis . First of all I want to thank you for this nice comment. It's always great to get some constructive feedback from dribbblers. I agree with you about the 'i' but I'm not sure if these guides really work on this kind of logos. I mean the logo should look a bit raw. And the 'o'. Well it's the same size as all of the other letters, maybe it's some kind of illusion or something :) Thanks again for your comment mister, will do my best.
@Claire Coullon Thanks Claire, I'm always happy to see comments from typo master like you are. I agree with you that sometimes script logos should look 'natural' :)
about 1 year ago
@Ivan Bobrov thanks!!
about 1 year ago
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Jovan Petrić
Like a jelly. Beautiful work buddy.
about 1 year ago
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Edgar Palacios
sweet!
about 1 year ago
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Marcelo López
Awesome!! Good work! =)
about 1 year ago
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Matt Vergotis
this really popped on the site. had to take a look. nice work Rokas
about 1 year ago
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Jan Meeus
Wonderful lettering. I wonna eat it!
about 1 year ago