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My Two Cents

by Matthew Spiel Aug 25, 2010
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Shot_1282764080_teaser Feedback, Plz I'm unsure of the alternating shear angles, the kerning on "the" and "life," and whether the illustrated bits feel balanced enough overall. So... 1, 2, 3, g... August 25, 2010

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Feedback, Plz

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7 Responses

  1. Captain Matthew Spiel

    here is my 2 cents. straighten em out. wrap em in a circle and lighten up the black (if you can't because of the branding, thats cool too).

    The circles are a little off center with eachother, i tried em straight on center, but it looked wonky.

    Enjoy.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Pro Eames Patrick Algrim

    Woah this is fantastic. I like what you did with the circles. Muchos better (that's my Spanish attempt).

    almost 2 years ago

  3. Pro Sombrero Chandler Van De Water

    Great rebound, Matthew. Feels solid.

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Pro Desk Trent Walton

    Ya matthew, good thinkin'

    almost 2 years ago

  5. Pro Squaredeye_336x336 Matthew Smith

    Really nice work bro.

    almost 2 years ago

  6. Captain Matthew Spiel

    thanks fellas!

    almost 2 years ago

  7. 1 Robyn Britt

    I like the circles being off center - adds a "life" factor in there, its not always perfect, but we are always blessed! I love this.

    9 months ago

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