What do you make of this?
about 1 year ago
The tension in the negative space where the horseshoes meet on the right is killing me. They look like they're trying to touch at the bottom of the intersection but they just can't quite get there.
@Andrew Ah, okay. So I should increase it, you think?
I think maybe the whitespace should match the curve of the horseshoe that's in front (so the top one on the left and the bottom on on the right).
The spaces are meant to be indicative of shadows cast. I kind of like the way it tapers off… perhaps I could exaggerate it a little more though.
ah ok, that's definitely not coming across, it just looks a bit wonky
Maybe i'll just do it at a uniform margin, then. Thanks for your input. :)
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Mark Gilliland
What do you make of this?
about 1 year ago
The tension in the negative space where the horseshoes meet on the right is killing me. They look like they're trying to touch at the bottom of the intersection but they just can't quite get there.
about 1 year ago
Pro
Mark Gilliland
@Andrew Ah, okay. So I should increase it, you think?
about 1 year ago
I think maybe the whitespace should match the curve of the horseshoe that's in front (so the top one on the left and the bottom on on the right).
about 1 year ago
Pro
Mark Gilliland
The spaces are meant to be indicative of shadows cast. I kind of like the way it tapers off… perhaps I could exaggerate it a little more though.
about 1 year ago
ah ok, that's definitely not coming across, it just looks a bit wonky
about 1 year ago
Pro
Mark Gilliland
Maybe i'll just do it at a uniform margin, then. Thanks for your input. :)
about 1 year ago