The connection "iv" start looking more like "w" because of the curve on the right . I think if you make simple connection between "v" and "a" it would be better.
Other than that really nice type!
Nice, Julius. It might be interesting if the tail of the "a" swooped out a bit so that the flow kind of tailed off and didn't end so abruptly. Just a thought.
Nice flow and I really like the color. If you work on this any further, maybe try disconnecting the "i" from the second "v". I also like @Sean Heisler idea of adding a tail on the "a".
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Viva - beauty salon.
What do you think?
still not sure about colors and A letter
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about 1 year ago
I think this is great stuff and the wall texture does cool too, but the connection between v and a kinda makes me read it as Vula:)
about 1 year ago
awesome treatment, but i read it as 'vuva'
about 1 year ago
i guess that the dot on "i" causes a bit of confusion.
about 1 year ago
The connection "iv" start looking more like "w" because of the curve on the right . I think if you make simple connection between "v" and "a" it would be better.
Other than that really nice type!
about 1 year ago
Great flow Julius.
about 1 year ago
Looking good. But yes, I read "vuva" too.
about 1 year ago
I read it as vuva too! Stick an L in for vulva! Nice type though
about 1 year ago
I agree that the 'i' is the troublemaker... but this looks lovely already!
about 1 year ago
Like the A . . . color seems random.
about 1 year ago
Nice, Julius. It might be interesting if the tail of the "a" swooped out a bit so that the flow kind of tailed off and didn't end so abruptly. Just a thought.
about 1 year ago
Obviously my mind is in the gutter... on first glance, I saw "vulva".
about 1 year ago
working on to make it viva :)!
about 1 year ago
take a look at Floris Voorveld or Sergey Shapiro 'Viva's" logos.
about 1 year ago
@Deividas Deiv Graužinis - client chose another concept + with different colors :)
thanks :)
about 1 year ago
the colors are amazing - for sure
about 1 year ago
Nice flow and I really like the color. If you work on this any further, maybe try disconnecting the "i" from the second "v". I also like @Sean Heisler idea of adding a tail on the "a".
about 1 year ago