Revisions & final
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I didn't have the time to post during while working on the revisions unfortunately, but this is the further development of the Bookouture logo (printed tests). Original on top, two of the revised alternates in the middle and final, approved version on the bottom. Tried out some variations for the 'b' loop/swash, but in the end went back to the original one for its flow and distinctiveness. Subjective of course but in any case, it's definitely attention-grabbing. (To better balance start/end of the word, we changed the 'e' tail instead.)
A sincere thank you to everyone for the fantastic, very thoughtful feedback and suggestions on the first version. It was really helpful and much appreciated, both by myself and the client. Couldn't have asked for anything better!
Full size image (with annotations at an actually readable size) and process write-up on my portfolio.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
These are amazing! I want to make beautiful type like you when I grow up!
about 1 year ago
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saurabhj
Super owsum... Luv the type
about 1 year ago
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Milosz Klimek
Lovely read, project and process, Claire.
about 1 year ago
@Nick Haha thank you! Cheers as well for the mention on twitter, I appreciate it!
@saurabhj Thanks, glad you like it
@Milosz Thanks for taking the time to have a look, always love hearing from you!
about 1 year ago
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Andy Luce
Fantastic! I love where you ended up!
about 1 year ago
This is just perfect, Claire (still love the tail on the "e"). I'd love to see this in public.
about 1 year ago
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Jed Bridges
Beautiful! I love seeing your refinement, and how much you care about the final product : )
about 1 year ago
Nice!
about 1 year ago
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Matt Macdonald
Beauty! Thanks for sharing...
about 1 year ago
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Drew Melton
I love looking at your work
about 1 year ago
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Danny Johnson Junior
Great work thanks for sharing the process! Typically love seeing that more than the final product.
about 1 year ago
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Nikita Prokhorov
Beautiful job Claire. The refinements you made did the trick and made this logo come together nicely. Great work.
about 1 year ago
A beautiful result, even though I was still rooting for that 3rd one, just love that 't' :)
about 1 year ago
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Michael Spitz
Great final Claire! Tons of character, and very well balanced. Loved the process post.
about 1 year ago
@Andy Thanks a lot, pleased to hear it!
@Christopher Cheers for the kind words, yes me too! Will be keeping an eye out.
@Jed Thanks, I appreciate that. Spent a while on those final details, glad it paid off :)
@Paul Thanks!
@Matt Thanks for taking the time to have a look, glad you like it!
about 1 year ago
@Drew Thanks for the really nice comment, that means a lot - particularly considering the amount of time I spend looking at your page..!
@Danny Yeah I'm with you on the process (if that wasn't obvious from the amount I write about it, haha). Thank you!
@Nikita Thank you so much for all of your help! I think the revisions to both halves made a huge difference. It was fun trying out that 'e' too. Thanks again!
@Yassine Ha, yes I thought you might have liked that one :) We did too, but in the end felt the simpler approach was more suited. Thanks very much!
@Michael Cheers! Thanks again for the help and suggestions, hopefully managed to get that sneaky 'e' fixed in the end!
about 1 year ago
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Brandon Harrison
So good!!!
about 1 year ago
@Brandon Thank you!
about 1 year ago
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Lewis
You've done it again. I need this typography as a font -or- my logo!
about 1 year ago
Haha thanks @Lewis! I think (well, know) I would need quite a while to make a full font..
about 1 year ago
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Alex Pankratov
Very nice, Claire. Gor really nice flow to it. Thanks for the process write-up, very interesting.
about 1 year ago
Thank you @Alex, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading! I hope all is well on your end.
about 1 year ago
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Nayla Smith
It's so great to see your process and the result is simply awe-inspiring! I am seriously in love with that 'b' - it will make a great icon.
about 1 year ago
Thanks very much @Nayla! It's funny there were some quite divided opinions on the 'b' from the previous shot, I'm glad to hear you like it!
about 1 year ago