I think it's the position of the van that makes it look so much like a grenade (and the grid of course). Is there any way you could put the van in a different spot?
For the record, I didn't see grenade until I read the comments, haha.
Nice! I didn't see a grenade. But I can understand what people are saying. I think when scaled down the truck isn't identifiable enough, maybe? Eh? I don't know. Great work!
Possibly changing the speed lines on the truck to black would help change the silhouette and get away from this grenade people are talking about...I never saw the grenade in the first place, though.
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Liam McKay
Thought I saw a hand grenade for a second. Looks great though.
about 1 year ago
I'm worried, I saw the grenade as well :S
about 1 year ago
worried for my eyes, the illustration is great!
about 1 year ago
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James Graves
Love this, looks great! I did, however, see the hand grenade lol great feel though!
about 1 year ago
Nice, I saw a grenade as well!
about 1 year ago
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Tim Boelaars
BOOM! Back to making it less grenade-ish. BUT HOW?!
about 1 year ago
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Jesse Penico
I think ultimately it's the globe. So maybe change that to a map of the earth instead of a grid? Just throwing it out there ... like a grenade ...
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about 1 year ago
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Tim Boelaars
Thanks @Jesse Penico, I think you're right.
about 1 year ago
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kirk visola
I like this. I don't see grenade, but I do see competition. The name and the icon are competing too much. I like this though. Great job.
about 1 year ago
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Christian Annyas
Five vertical lines instead of six?
about 1 year ago
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Christian Annyas
No, you'll end up with a straight line in the center. Four?
about 1 year ago
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James ✌
Wow, definitely seen a grenade at first too. This is awesome though!
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
AWESOME BOSS SAUCE!
about 1 year ago
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Keiran Flanigan
Just change the word "SHIPPING" to "WARFARE". Easy fix.
about 1 year ago
I think it's the position of the van that makes it look so much like a grenade (and the grid of course). Is there any way you could put the van in a different spot?
For the record, I didn't see grenade until I read the comments, haha.
about 1 year ago
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Anthony Lane
No 'nade here Timothy. I'm torn on the lines that flank 'Shipping', like em for their implied speed, but part of me feels their extraneous.
about 1 year ago
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Tim Boelaars
Thanks for the feedback everyone, appreciate it. I'll definitely have to change this up a bit.
about 1 year ago
I saw grenade as well from the thumbnail. Maybe just changing the position of the truck could help. Well done as usual, though, on styling.
about 1 year ago
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Trevor Rogers
Nice! I didn't see a grenade. But I can understand what people are saying. I think when scaled down the truck isn't identifiable enough, maybe? Eh? I don't know. Great work!
about 1 year ago
This is amazing!
about 1 year ago
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Richie Stewart
Possibly changing the speed lines on the truck to black would help change the silhouette and get away from this grenade people are talking about...I never saw the grenade in the first place, though.
about 1 year ago
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Rui Melo
I seen the Grenade too! Not a bad thing though because no one is going to be viewing this that scaled down anyway.
about 1 year ago
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Perhaps?
by Matt Milosavljevic
Just thinking out loud... Not sure if the circular line is too much...
about 1 year ago
hahaha frrrresh handgrenade at first sight. pretty funny with the context of the worldwide shipping
about 1 year ago