Looks good, but I'd recommend changing the layout a little so that the card has been casually set down on the board. As it is now, it looks a little stiff. And - it goes without saying - the details are AMAZING! Looking really, really great!
@Anna Paschenko haha, I know, but at smaller sizes it was hard to fit the text (the bottom one) along with the VISA logo in the botton area so I changed it ;)
This looks really nice Umar. Three quick and minor suggestions: 1) How about placing the credit card at an angle? 2) The stroke around the credit card number and account holder is too dark. Maybe lighten it up a little? 3) I would remove the word 'Credit Card'... or make it smaller.
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Umar Irshad
Ok, so here's another shot of iOS icon I am working on, what do y'all think?
Ohh and ofcourse, greatly inspired by Asher.
about 1 year ago
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Zach Forrester
Looks good, but I'd recommend changing the layout a little so that the card has been casually set down on the board. As it is now, it looks a little stiff. And - it goes without saying - the details are AMAZING! Looking really, really great!
about 1 year ago
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Gert Jan Lodder / Pixellod
Looks great Umar, though I agree with @Zach Forrester
about 1 year ago
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Yummygum
Great job! I wouldn't mind seeing a tiny bit darker stroke on the creditcard (or make the shading on the paper lighter).
about 1 year ago
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Umar Irshad
Will work on the credit card, thanks guys :)
about 1 year ago
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Mateusz Dembek
This difference between crumpled paper and a shiny credit card is just brilliant! :)
about 1 year ago
awesome use of the app icon shape..
about 1 year ago
very good, but I think that the distance from the inner shadow on the board should be lower, and rotate the card a bit
about 1 year ago
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Umar Irshad
@Andrey S. Rodrigues Yes, will be rotating the credit card as well, will need to work on anti aliasing though.
about 1 year ago
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Nikki Galvan
Love it. Detail is great.
about 1 year ago
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Mark Peck
added crinkles really make the receipt great!
about 1 year ago
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Prakash Ghodke
Fantabulous!!!! Great work mate.
about 1 year ago
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Andrea Cau
The icon is really cool man, but I thinks there are too many small detail for little work space like this. My two cent.
about 1 year ago
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thiyagu ㋡
My next icon is going to be truly inspire from umar's work ;)
about 1 year ago
That's hot!
about 1 year ago
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Joao Pires
Good stuff Umar. Really well done.
about 1 year ago
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DX GRAPHIC
Great Work
about 1 year ago
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Anna Paschenko
Looks great as always! But I'm used to seeing the VISA logo in the bottom part of the card (as on your previos shot) :)
about 1 year ago
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Umar Irshad
@Anna Paschenko haha, I know, but at smaller sizes it was hard to fit the text (the bottom one) along with the VISA logo in the botton area so I changed it ;)
about 1 year ago
This looks really nice Umar. Three quick and minor suggestions: 1) How about placing the credit card at an angle? 2) The stroke around the credit card number and account holder is too dark. Maybe lighten it up a little? 3) I would remove the word 'Credit Card'... or make it smaller.
about 1 year ago
Awesome details... Loved the original too!
about 1 year ago
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Bill Organizer iOS Icon (Final)
by Umar Irshad
Final icon for the upcoming app "Bill Organizer". Also worked on icons for iPad for future use.
about 1 year ago
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Alexandre Crenn
Very great work dude !
12 months ago