Top or bottom? Thanks @John Peele for the suggestion. I also condensed the look of the bottom mark a bit.
over 1 year ago
I love the style of these, I like the bottom more, the house seems to fit more, think its because its smaller and tighter looking also at the bottom 'bird houses' flows really nice
Definitely the bottom, the bird house image is less fussy and more true to it's image. I'm not sure if it is just the gradient at the bottom that makes 'BIRD HOUSES' look better and bolder, so i'd make sure you apply that same thinking to the final piece. All I would recommend is that you should try adding a small amount of gradient to act as a shadow under the perch, and just take the outer gradient out slightly so that the type can stand out more.
You did a great job of incorporating all the suggestions.
Awesome, thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback!
@Jerome Collinge @Will Hemming @John Peele
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