It may be me personally, but in my opinion is seems like the spacing around the "i" is a bit too loose. I know you're trying to adjust to the other letterforms, but perhaps you could tighten that up a smidge?
@Andy Luce I see what you're saying. It looks kind of "gappy" between the "G" and the "H" also. I might make that whole word smaller and kern it out more.
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over 1 year ago
i dont know why the middle circle on the crown bothers me... but it does... is the diamond bigger in that point?
over 1 year ago
@Mike Greenwell that's just something weird with the anti-aliasing. All of the circles are the same size.
over 1 year ago
It may be me personally, but in my opinion is seems like the spacing around the "i" is a bit too loose. I know you're trying to adjust to the other letterforms, but perhaps you could tighten that up a smidge?
over 1 year ago
@Andy Luce I see what you're saying. It looks kind of "gappy" between the "G" and the "H" also. I might make that whole word smaller and kern it out more.
over 1 year ago
Yeah man, I think that the "i" in KINGS could be tweaked a small amount as well ;)
over 1 year ago
I think you should try to tone down the "awesome" and tweak the "badass" a little bit. But, I would leave it alone :)
over 1 year ago