Wip Workinprogress

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  1. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    A work in progress for a client launching a t-shirt business, Any thoughts, or suggestions appreciated.

    about 2 years ago

  2. Tyler Corbett Tyler Corbett

    Not entirely sure why the shape of the "U" extends into the "M" or why the "E" drops below some.

    Also maybe tone down the shadow a bit? Other than that, looks like a good start. :)

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    about 2 years ago

  3. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    I understand @Tyler Corbett Its all part of how they put their T shirts together. Im not a big fan of impact but its the font choice for their shirts. Will def work on the shadow this morning. Hope all is well and the new job is working out for u homie.

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    about 2 years ago

  4. Silas Godfrey Silas Godfrey

    Client wants and needs will get you every time. But I agree with @Tyler Corbett, the shadow is super harsh, also after you've lightened up the shadow a bit you could use a gradient mask to give it some depth, it's all a little flat. Great start, I love a good t-shirt.

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    about 2 years ago

  5. Richard Lowery Jr. Richard Lowery Jr.

    @Silas Godfrey yes I agree with you. Will def add in both of your feedbacks look for a rebound tonight or tomorrow morning. Thank you for your wonderful feedback guys. Here you go Silas, http://www.facebook.com/U.GLYBrand/photos

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    about 2 years ago

  6. Sorry it took so long, been busy with finals and work. Cleaned up the shadow, and had the client redo the main type

    about 2 years ago

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