Toodles: SXSW 2012 edition! Was a crazy time and despite several things going wrong, there was almost too much right. Figured I should commemorate the occasion.
Hmm, not sure about this one. Love your work and it's always fantastic, but this seems a little all over the place. The S and V creates a lot of weird and awkward kerning issues and the P feels way too heavy next to the rest of the letters. Definitely see where you're going with it, just needs a little TLC.
@Kevin Burr - Thanks for the feedback dude. My original used an alternate spelling with an extra 'R' and that's contributing to that spacing between the 'E' and the 'V'. Going to vector this so I'll have a chance to give the line weights some help. ;)
I really like this one, it has so much movement and the swashes are making some amazing letter interactions. I agree with @Kevin's observations, nothing a bit of vectoring won't fix (ah, the all time issue of not being able to edit spacing on an actual drawing..) Looking forward to seeing it!
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Toodles: SXSW 2012 edition! Was a crazy time and despite several things going wrong, there was almost too much right. Figured I should commemorate the occasion.
over 1 year ago
SICK!!!
over 1 year ago
damn you, bullock!
over 1 year ago
^ agreed.
over 1 year ago
so much motion. it's fantastic.
over 1 year ago
Hmm, not sure about this one. Love your work and it's always fantastic, but this seems a little all over the place. The S and V creates a lot of weird and awkward kerning issues and the P feels way too heavy next to the rest of the letters. Definitely see where you're going with it, just needs a little TLC.
over 1 year ago
Excellent!
over 1 year ago
hell yeah baby. Persevere indeed.
over 1 year ago
@Kevin Burr - Thanks for the feedback dude. My original used an alternate spelling with an extra 'R' and that's contributing to that spacing between the 'E' and the 'V'. Going to vector this so I'll have a chance to give the line weights some help. ;)
over 1 year ago
No problem, buddy-bud! I'm sure it'll turn out great! =)
over 1 year ago
I wanna have that paper @_@
over 1 year ago
Love that 'S' :D
over 1 year ago
I really like this one, it has so much movement and the swashes are making some amazing letter interactions. I agree with @Kevin's observations, nothing a bit of vectoring won't fix (ah, the all time issue of not being able to edit spacing on an actual drawing..) Looking forward to seeing it!
over 1 year ago
I love this word when rendered by hand. I have it tattooed on my forearm.
over 1 year ago
that is amazing. great work!
over 1 year ago
good lettering!
over 1 year ago