@Alex Toth Noo I totally agree! Please if you have some advice then I would greatly appreciate it! Just wanted to see where it would look good placed next to dough.
@Nick Slater I would try losing the uppercase for "GET". Seems stiff which is okay for contrast but in this case I don't think that type of contrasting style works well. Maybe even use a similar lettering style for "Get" that you used for Dough and tuck it in a little closer as if the dough is rising outward towards it... just a thought.
Love this Nick. I agre with Mike and Alex. Lowercase get for sure. I like the idea of the g swashing around and melding in with Dough. My only other thought is that the top left of the "D" seems fatter than the rest of the letters. Maybe just thin it up a little, but the whole thing is stellar!
This is beautiful type. To add my two cents to the "Get" conversation, I could see it happening in a nice, thin script in order to contrast with the thicker script of the "Dough".
But seeing this, I think you'll figure out an elegant solution regardless.
Excellent work.
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Nick Slater
What you guys think?
about 1 year ago
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Mike Jones
This is Doughp! You have some sick skills bro. Can't wait to see it finished.
about 1 year ago
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Deividas Bielskis
looks delicious:)
about 1 year ago
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Mike Jones
That "D" is spot on.
about 1 year ago
Nice. Looks like it's ready to bake... not sure about the "GET" lettering. Seems to clash a bit... maybe its just me.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
Thanks guys! Trying to figure out what to do with the get.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
@Alex Toth Noo I totally agree! Please if you have some advice then I would greatly appreciate it! Just wanted to see where it would look good placed next to dough.
about 1 year ago
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Muhammad Ali Effendy
Looks promising.
about 1 year ago
It's Dough'ish ;).
And very, very nice. Again!
about 1 year ago
@Nick Slater I would try losing the uppercase for "GET". Seems stiff which is okay for contrast but in this case I don't think that type of contrasting style works well. Maybe even use a similar lettering style for "Get" that you used for Dough and tuck it in a little closer as if the dough is rising outward towards it... just a thought.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
@Alex Toth Thanks buddy! As always your feedback is amazing!
about 1 year ago
Put the "GET" on a curve that follows the same line as the swash and baseline.
about 1 year ago
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Mike Jones
Have the "g" for get be similar in style to the "g" in dough but have it tail connect back to the top of the "D" maybe??
about 1 year ago
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kirk visola
Nick, this looks awesome. If anything, a lower case "g" would tuck nicely between the "d" and the "o". This is great man. I love it.
about 1 year ago
Love this Nick. I agre with Mike and Alex. Lowercase get for sure. I like the idea of the g swashing around and melding in with Dough. My only other thought is that the top left of the "D" seems fatter than the rest of the letters. Maybe just thin it up a little, but the whole thing is stellar!
about 1 year ago
could use "GET" everything lowercased
about 1 year ago
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Neil Tasker
Awesome man lets collab soon for sure!
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
THAT BE AWESOME!
about 1 year ago
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Herson Rodriguez
May be have the "GET" lowercase or just have it less styled. Do I make sense? I really love the "Dough" tho very cool
about 1 year ago
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Jerome Collinge
Looking fresh !
about 1 year ago
Dope man. Love it.
about 1 year ago
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Drew Melton
Killer!
about 1 year ago
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Nate Eaton
This is beautiful type. To add my two cents to the "Get" conversation, I could see it happening in a nice, thin script in order to contrast with the thicker script of the "Dough".
But seeing this, I think you'll figure out an elegant solution regardless.
Excellent work.
about 1 year ago
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Joonbug
"get" sounds masculine in a way so what if you used a sharper font, gritty and hand-drawn. The "dough" part is perfect!
also the position of "get" is weird..maybe center it? idk :)
about 1 year ago
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Brekk Bockrath
Hot damn that D is lovely.
about 1 year ago