That's a really good start! I like it.
Tough, I'd resize down the tick a bit, and resize down the delete icon even more and maybe set its color to light gray to make it less visible.
That pin in the navigation bar is awesome!
Oh no @Raymundo Martín I noticed. Took me a minute to realize that it wasn't Flashlight where the strike through made the 'a' look odd ... but it was, in fact, Fleshlight.
"Fleshlight" HAHAHAHAH! Anyways, I really like this. I'm not sure if I'm liking the font used for the items. I also think the different views down at the bottom look too similar to each other. But other than that, I'm really diggin it.
Looks cool, I just did a shot with a torn paper just before you. So now I have two pictures with torn paper under my following sector. I guess the torn paper is overused :(
I do think the paper that are torn is a bit tacky, a bit to perfect maybe?
When I did my torn paper, I actually shredded a paper into to pieces, scanned one of them and traced the outcome in Illustrator. Feel free to have a look at the result:
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Trying to improve myself at UI design.
It's still a work in progress, so all suggestions and criticism will be appreciated.
Thanks my twitter followers :)
PS: Don't mind the half-pixels in this preview; check the full size ;)
Original: http://d.pr/UIFH
about 1 year ago
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Mathieu Berenguer ▲▼▲
Nice dude !
about 1 year ago
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Umar Irshad
Ghakas :D good work dude! btw its not client work?
about 1 year ago
@Umar Irshad It's for a client.The only difference is that I am not sure if I am going to get paid XD
about 1 year ago
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Andrea Cau
Love the first draft you post on Twitter. Much more original than this. Btw really beautiful work man!
about 1 year ago
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Robert van Klinken
Nice one dude. Personally I'd make all the icons a little smaller. And use the same margins here. Great start!
about 1 year ago
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Jip
Super crisp!
about 1 year ago
awesome work dude. love the staple pin effect on header.
about 1 year ago
Interesting shopping list you got there, just sayin' :P
about 1 year ago
@AndyTheJoker You like this version more? In both cases, I win ;)
@Robert van Klinken Thanks for the pointer - http://d.pr/NIIQ
@Jonathan Mazaltov It's a typo :D
about 1 year ago
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Kubilay Sapayer
@Asher share that wood texture
about 1 year ago
@Asher LOLz
about 1 year ago
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Guillaume Gaubert
That's a really good start! I like it.
Tough, I'd resize down the tick a bit, and resize down the delete icon even more and maybe set its color to light gray to make it less visible.
That pin in the navigation bar is awesome!
about 1 year ago
Does it make me dirty that I am, presumably, the only one who noticed the last item?
about 1 year ago
Oh no @Raymundo Martín I noticed. Took me a minute to realize that it wasn't Flashlight where the strike through made the 'a' look odd ... but it was, in fact, Fleshlight.
No judgement here.
about 1 year ago
leather bag, cowboy hat and a fleshlight ? what are you planning ?
about 1 year ago
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Julien Martin
Except for the UI elements non-standard sizes (navbar, tab bar, tableview cells), everything is DELICIOUS!
about 1 year ago
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Jake Kwaschnefski
"Fleshlight" HAHAHAHAH! Anyways, I really like this. I'm not sure if I'm liking the font used for the items. I also think the different views down at the bottom look too similar to each other. But other than that, I'm really diggin it.
about 1 year ago
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Andrea Cau
@kyotux Yep! You win in that shot. :D
about 1 year ago
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Mikkel Aggerbo
Looks cool, I just did a shot with a torn paper just before you. So now I have two pictures with torn paper under my following sector. I guess the torn paper is overused :(
I do think the paper that are torn is a bit tacky, a bit to perfect maybe?
When I did my torn paper, I actually shredded a paper into to pieces, scanned one of them and traced the outcome in Illustrator. Feel free to have a look at the result:
http://dribbble.com/shots/467626-Torn-paper-Again-?list=following
Keep us updated on the project :)
about 1 year ago
@Kubilay Sapayer You can get it here.
@Julien Martin I compared the dimensions with the template and both navbar and tab bar were only 1-2px off.I've fixed them though :)
@Mikkel Aggerbo You are right! Making torn paper is tricky indeed.Some one suggested to use "Freeform Pen Tool" and I might try it as well.
about 1 year ago
lol @Mikkel Aggerbo , i just uploaded one too :P
about 1 year ago
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Kubilay Sapayer
@Asher where ?
about 1 year ago
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Eddy Gann
I agree with @AndyTheJoker. I like the other version. Both are great, of course.
about 1 year ago
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Philip Litassy
Nice and sharp. :)
about 1 year ago