Agree for a tiny bit with the line-height, it doesn't feel good, but it does. If you catch my drift ;)
Personally, I would take a second look at the shadow / border. There's a lot going on there. White border at the top. Shadow at the bottom. Thick border + opacity. Another white border. Less = more!
@Andrew Liebchen I think that achieving the most visual richness with the least amount of visual elements is what good design is. So when seeing something pretty like this shot, still I try to give feedback to try and help a fellow designer remove stuff to try and make it even better .
@Wes Oudshoorn I do agree with you, and hope that everyone finds your critique here valuable, as do I. My snark was not meant to discourage your voice, only to comment on the creep of a kind of digital decorative baroque that is so commonplace (yet unnecessary) on Dribbble.
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Erik Deiner
Sleek! I think you should try to decrease the line-height maybe but it's up to you ;) anyway me like!
about 1 year ago
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Dennis Covent
Clean! I like the line-height :)
about 1 year ago
Nice 'nd clean! Personal website?
Agree for a tiny bit with the line-height, it doesn't feel good, but it does. If you catch my drift ;)
Personally, I would take a second look at the shadow / border. There's a lot going on there. White border at the top. Shadow at the bottom. Thick border + opacity. Another white border. Less = more!
about 1 year ago
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Hugo
Yeah, nice one!
about 1 year ago
Like the border a lot!!!
about 1 year ago
I think we can come to tell that you did a good job on this. Everything else seems to be a matter of personal preference. Nice work Wouter.
about 1 year ago
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Ted Goas
Nice work, Wouter!
about 1 year ago
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Hugo Loning
Nice work, that border... luv it!
about 1 year ago
10 should be something with 5 and the last one should be like something with 10 :P
But cant figure it out what it should be.
about 1 year ago
I think the line height is great. What I think throws that body of text off is all the links.
about 1 year ago
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Alex Pankratov
TEN fingers? Are you sure? :)
about 1 year ago
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Wouter de Bres
@Alex Pankratov I am not sure..I have to admit.. it was actually a wild guess..
about 1 year ago
@Wes Oudshoorn less=more? This is Dribbble...More=more! Yes=more!
about 1 year ago
@Andrew Liebchen I think that achieving the most visual richness with the least amount of visual elements is what good design is. So when seeing something pretty like this shot, still I try to give feedback to try and help a fellow designer remove stuff to try and make it even better .
But. We make the rules to break them.
about 1 year ago
@Wes Oudshoorn I do agree with you, and hope that everyone finds your critique here valuable, as do I. My snark was not meant to discourage your voice, only to comment on the creep of a kind of digital decorative baroque that is so commonplace (yet unnecessary) on Dribbble.
about 1 year ago
@Andrew Liebchen A sigh of relief ;)
about 1 year ago
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Gert van Duinen
Neat! ;)
about 1 year ago
What's that font? It looks great :)
about 1 year ago
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Wouter de Bres
@Bram Schulting it is 'Open Sans'
about 1 year ago
Rebound
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by Bram Schulting
I Really love Wouters' shot, so I wanted to make a rebound. I also made an iPhone version.
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Profile iPhone
by Bram Schulting
I Really love Wouters' shot, so I wanted to make a rebound. I also made a desktop version.
about 1 year ago