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Travel Case

by Jesse Dodds Pro | August 18, 2010
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11 Responses

  1. Pro Op-1 Jesse Dodds

    Getting there with the metallic look. Feedback would be much appreciated :) Cheers!

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Avatar Tony Lane

    Damn?

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Josh_avatar_big_02_300x300 Josh Pigford

    The corner feels...odd. Like it was sawed off or something. Feel like it should taper off more instead of having a hard edge.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Tumblr_lqwk84y3vo1qzu15ho1_1280 Tyler Galpin

    Out of curiosity, Jesse: do you use Photoshop or Illustrator for making your icons?

    over 1 year ago

  5. Pro Pic Benjamin De Cock

    Currently working on something metallic too so I know it's damn hard to achieve! Anyway, nice work :)

    over 1 year ago

  6. Pro Me Justin Belcher

    Looks great! Lower screwhead looks a little thinner from the rotation (might want to darken some of the subpixels), and I agree about the corner outline at least at this resolution.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Pro Joel-backyard-07-2011-med Joel Glovier

    Boom! Amazing. Can't say much in the way of feedback...although now that I see Josh's statement, I can see what he means. It seems like there is a 1px light inner shadow that should not be showing on that outer edge. But I didn't even notice until Josh pointed it out.

    over 1 year ago

  8. Pro Joel-backyard-07-2011-med Joel Glovier

    But man it's really amazing...

    over 1 year ago

  9. Pro Myavatar Steve Lowtwait

    The main issue I see is that you don't have a consistent light source. The light hitting the two flat pieces heading offscreen is not consistent on both, as is the light hitting the corner piece which looks like it's coming from below. (And the leather is lit from above.)

    Then I'm not sure what the rounded part of the corner is. At first I thought it was concave then I realized its probably convex and bulbous. That part especially needs to reflect some sort of light source even if it's a dull metal.

    I know this is a work in progress so I'm sure you'll polish it nicely. I like the textures and I think you've got a good feel for creating metal. Good work so far!

    over 1 year ago

  10. Pro Op-1 Jesse Dodds

    Thanks for all the comments so far guys, it's much appreciated :)

    For reference, here's what a real travel/flight case looks like: HERE

    over 1 year ago

  11. Schermata_2010-08-27_a_18 Tommaso Nervegna

    nice leather texture...

    over 1 year ago

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