added a "ground" line in background & shaded a contour in wings. -seeing if it added anything to the overall mark, also trying out this color.
over 1 year ago
I think it helps. I'm wondering if the eye on top might need some highlight action as well.
Great stuff! The inline type seems out of place to me, super contrast-y.
What if you move the inline type up and remove the ground line? You could also try changing the color of the type so that it can serve as the ground line? I really like this - the figure in the negative space is nice.
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