I like this alot jak, but to solve your kerning issues between the D,W,Y I think tracking this out a bit more would be helpful. Also the counter form of the top of the "B" doesn't need to be exact that of the "R". Try using the top counter of the b as your bottom counter, vice versa. Looking forward to seeing your final results!
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Jak Horner
Another direction.
about 1 year ago
I like this alot jak, but to solve your kerning issues between the D,W,Y I think tracking this out a bit more would be helpful. Also the counter form of the top of the "B" doesn't need to be exact that of the "R". Try using the top counter of the b as your bottom counter, vice versa. Looking forward to seeing your final results!
about 1 year ago
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Jak Horner
Thanks @Wade Winebrenner I appreciate the critic. Now that I take a step back, it does need some kerning.
I hadn't really seen a B like that before, so thats how I got to that. I'll try flipping it and seeing what it looks like in comparison. Thanks dude.
about 1 year ago
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Billy French
Did they ever pick a direction btw? Where did this go?
about 1 year ago
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Jak Horner
I'll post when it's done.
about 1 year ago