The top part (the cross and 'Harvest') is freaking wonderful. The 'christian fellowship' part seems a bit off. Maybe it's the leading? Also, the descender on the 't' also looks kinda funky to me.
You could try making the 'CF' part smaller? That might help.
Hi James, agree with all the others. Christian Fellowship I think needs to balance with the line elements coming out from the cross.
I would suggest a thinner weight and a lot smaller. Maybe to align stright underneath Harvest on one line? May be to smaller point size then though. Keep on it :) Looking good
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James Graves
Is this layout awkward? Can't seem to nail this one down :/
thoughts?
about 1 year ago
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Jesse Penico
The top part (the cross and 'Harvest') is freaking wonderful. The 'christian fellowship' part seems a bit off. Maybe it's the leading? Also, the descender on the 't' also looks kinda funky to me.
You could try making the 'CF' part smaller? That might help.
about 1 year ago
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Grayden Poper
Looking really nice. The area that needs the most attention is the "Christian Fellowship." It could be the actual font or the weight of the font.
about 1 year ago
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Neil Tasker
nice!
about 1 year ago
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James Graves
@Jesse Penico thanks, man! like the idea of making them smaller! I'll def give that a try!
@Grayden Poper I was thinking of trying some san serif fonts?
@Neil Tasker thanks, man!
about 1 year ago
Hi James, agree with all the others. Christian Fellowship I think needs to balance with the line elements coming out from the cross.
I would suggest a thinner weight and a lot smaller. Maybe to align stright underneath Harvest on one line? May be to smaller point size then though. Keep on it :) Looking good
about 1 year ago
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James Graves
@Shannon Hatch thanks! i'll def play around with smaller type! :)
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Church Logo 2
by James Graves
How about this?
about 1 year ago
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Dustin Addair
anxious to hear if this was approved. I think its sick regardless. Good work.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
Sooo clean and fresh!
about 1 year ago