I need some help from all you type & shape geniuses. What do you think? Any parts look awkward to you?
about 2 years ago
I like everything, except for the top of the "o". I'm not sure about the dent in it.
Maybe 'something' with the f, just not sure what.
Thanks @Matthew Skiles . I thought I would hint at the connector thing but it might look slicker without the dent. I'll give it a go.
Thanks @Jonathan Quintin . I may just have been staring at this much too long but I'm not really quite happy with the bottom loop of the "f" and can't seem to get it right.... I think that's the 'something' on the f...
Perhaps 'slightly' too thick at the bottom?
@Jonathan Quintin Yeah, maybe that's it! I'll put it to rest and have another look in a couple of hours/days and see.
Fresh eyes in the morning ALWAYS works for me:)
Great work though.
@James Gill any thoughts?
@Jonathan Quintin I found out what it was on the "f". The bottom curve wasn't properly rounded, it has a slight 'dent'. Got rid of it now, I'll post a rebound once I've sorted colouring out.
first thing i noticed were the two hard edges on the left side of the T, and the bottom of the H. every other character has rounded caps. not sure if that was intentional...
@Benn Mendelsohn It was tbh. It somehow looked too soft to me without the sharp edges to pull it back. Do you think it looks weird?
well maybe just soften the edges a little bit. my eye went straight for those.
but overall it looks great! good work!
@Benn Mendelsohn Thanks!
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