That looks way better, taking the white out of the stripes. Can you get the outer white stroke even as well? Also, something about the three stars being centered with the offcenter 'A' is throwing me. Is the number 3 significant? Representing something?
Seems like they should stay, but I wonder if they can get closer together so that the A points to one? The Holy Ghost, perhaps. Either that or have the A point in between them more evenly, if that makes sense.
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All sections have the same dark background in this. That is the only change.
about 1 year ago
That looks way better, taking the white out of the stripes. Can you get the outer white stroke even as well? Also, something about the three stars being centered with the offcenter 'A' is throwing me. Is the number 3 significant? Representing something?
about 1 year ago
Thanks Stefan. Let me get after it a bit. See what I come up with.
The stars insignificant...except for the HOLY TRINITY! Ha, just playing. Would you rather see them gone or moved?
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Soccer Crest 4
by Andrew Brynjulson
Rebuilt. Decided to remove the "3D" offset effect in favor of a simpler, thick outer stroke. Cleaned up some spacing. Even out all of the strokes.
about 1 year ago
Seems like they should stay, but I wonder if they can get closer together so that the A points to one? The Holy Ghost, perhaps. Either that or have the A point in between them more evenly, if that makes sense.
about 1 year ago