Fry! Stay back! He's too powerful! Oh God, what have I done? What are their names? Well I'da done better, but it's plum hard pleading a case while awaiting trial for that there incompetence. It's okay, Bender. I like cooking too. Morbo will now introduce tonight's candidates... PUNY HUMAN NUMBER ONE, PUNY HUMAN NUMBER TWO, and Morbo's good friend, Richard Nixon.
Love the lorem on the mock up. I got so sick of "Can you change the lorem ipsum est dalor to xxxx" requests/'amends' from clients, I now use something very similar to yours.
I like the colors and the usage of the pretty photo in the upper part of the design.
The only thing that bothers me is the black large "Inspiring Office" arrow. I think it doesn't stand out much, because of the already dark translucent stripe underneath it. Because of that, i think it may be missed.
I'm not a fan of the yellow color and thought it may be cool to change up the color scheme a bit to lighten the whole thing up. As is, it feels a bit drab, even though you're using yellow, which is usually meant to brighten things up. Also, I thought bringing some of the environment from the image into the site would be kind of neat. Sort of reinforces the cleanness of the workspace. I imagine you're probably using a stock photo for the office space, but I wanted to at least show you how I would tie it together. Here's a link to the full rebound.
What's your thinking on having the action ("Learn More" button) above each headline I would likely need to read before clicking the button? Seems like it would be more natural from a scanning standpoint to have the button after that text hierarchically.
@Chris I agree. The yellow is a bit harsh. I love the idea of carrying some of the wood from the space into the equation. However, I'm not so sure if that suggestion is taking away from the primary photo on the site. Thoughts?
I like the top portion that Chris Wallace did in his rebound. With the wood background and his variation of the "login" and "join us" buttons. I think the size of your headers work better than how Chris changed them though.
@Paulo - interesting thought, I'll look at the contrast.
@chris - I like your shot, but its not us at all. As far as our mood and what we're after, the shot I posted is what we want/need.
@matthewspiel Here's the dummy copy : http://cl.ly/1wf3 @Dave, the tabs would pop up from vertically from bottom to top, and so they would have a bottom to top reading experience. It's an experiment, and this is a good place to do it :)
@all this is fun. Thanks.
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Matthew Smith
All comments, smart, stupid or otherwise please pay $1
almost 2 years ago
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Judson Collier
Mind me asking what location? Looks great!
Also, I don't have paypal. Please send me some dishes in the post and I will kindly wash them.
almost 2 years ago
Fail. You should've used GoogleCheckout.
Unrelated: we should lunch sometime soon.
almost 2 years ago
Does it cost money to click "Like"?
Do you have to pay to ask a question (or two)?
almost 2 years ago
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almost 2 years ago
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Ismael Burciaga
Umm the chairs are not aligned and the Flowers need some water.
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
@Joshua you got me there. Good feedback ;) - and yes, lunch is in order. I'd enjoy that.
@Ismael +1 for creativity.
almost 2 years ago
Fry! Stay back! He's too powerful! Oh God, what have I done? What are their names? Well I'da done better, but it's plum hard pleading a case while awaiting trial for that there incompetence. It's okay, Bender. I like cooking too. Morbo will now introduce tonight's candidates... PUNY HUMAN NUMBER ONE, PUNY HUMAN NUMBER TWO, and Morbo's good friend, Richard Nixon.
almost 2 years ago
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Michael Dick
Whitespace from the "Inspiring Office" arrow and the "What is CoWork" is too tight.
My 2cents. :-D
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
@Michael, glad to know I changed that since this shot. I wholeheartedly agree :)
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
Here's the current full screen (main nav dimmed because we won't launch with it immediately)
almost 2 years ago
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Florian Schroiff
Cow-ork? Some kind of Roleplay / Farmville crossover?
almost 2 years ago
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Wez Maynard
Love the lorem on the mock up. I got so sick of "Can you change the lorem ipsum est dalor to xxxx" requests/'amends' from clients, I now use something very similar to yours.
almost 2 years ago
I don't like the name, could you please change that?
almost 2 years ago
Thats way nicer than our co-working spaces!
I love the yellow color. Very nice.
If you enjoyed that comment, please pay $1.
almost 2 years ago
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Paulo Zoom
I like the colors and the usage of the pretty photo in the upper part of the design.
The only thing that bothers me is the black large "Inspiring Office" arrow. I think it doesn't stand out much, because of the already dark translucent stripe underneath it. Because of that, i think it may be missed.
almost 2 years ago
Rebound
Color Changes
by Chris Wallace!
I'm not a fan of the yellow color and thought it may be cool to change up the color scheme a bit to lighten the whole thing up. As is, it feels a bit drab, even though you're using yellow, which is usually meant to brighten things up. Also, I thought bringing some of the environment from the image into the site would be kind of neat. Sort of reinforces the cleanness of the workspace. I imagine you're probably using a stock photo for the office space, but I wanted to at least show you how I would tie it together. Here's a link to the full rebound.
almost 2 years ago
where did you get your filler copy? Would love to use that in my comps!
almost 2 years ago
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Dave Ruse
Lookin' good.
What's your thinking on having the action ("Learn More" button) above each headline I would likely need to read before clicking the button? Seems like it would be more natural from a scanning standpoint to have the button after that text hierarchically.
almost 2 years ago
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Michael Dick
Loving Chris Wallace's rebound. The wood floor patterns work great for the subject matter. :-D
almost 2 years ago
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Judson Collier
I'm actually totally down with the yellow. It looks nice.
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Sanders
@Chris I agree. The yellow is a bit harsh. I love the idea of carrying some of the wood from the space into the equation. However, I'm not so sure if that suggestion is taking away from the primary photo on the site. Thoughts?
almost 2 years ago
I like the top portion that Chris Wallace did in his rebound. With the wood background and his variation of the "login" and "join us" buttons. I think the size of your headers work better than how Chris changed them though.
I think the yellow still looks nice though...
almost 2 years ago
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Matthew Smith
@Paulo - interesting thought, I'll look at the contrast.
@chris - I like your shot, but its not us at all. As far as our mood and what we're after, the shot I posted is what we want/need.
@matthewspiel Here's the dummy copy : http://cl.ly/1wf3
@Dave, the tabs would pop up from vertically from bottom to top, and so they would have a bottom to top reading experience. It's an experiment, and this is a good place to do it :)
@all this is fun. Thanks.
almost 2 years ago
@Matthew, right on.
almost 2 years ago