I just reviewed the same comp on another screen and I'm definitely going to subtle the texture a bit - screen callibration issues.
Regarding the type treatment, I usually worry about that once I get the elements right within the overall comp, but it actually needs serious kening adjustments and AA tests, thanks for pointing that out ;)
Like it @Samuel Couto, but I must agree with @Paulo Zoom, the texture must be more subtle. Another thing I would work on is the border around the image, I don't know, maybe give it a subtle dark 1px border.
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Samuel Couto
Putting together a product item for a e-store.
Man you don't know how difficult it is to work with this type of images... :)
3 months ago
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Paulo Zoom
I'd make the texture a bit more subtle, and the type more readable. The AA makes it look a bit thin.
3 months ago
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Samuel Couto
I just reviewed the same comp on another screen and I'm definitely going to subtle the texture a bit - screen callibration issues.
Regarding the type treatment, I usually worry about that once I get the elements right within the overall comp, but it actually needs serious kening adjustments and AA tests, thanks for pointing that out ;)
3 months ago
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Ivo Miguel Silva
Like it @Samuel Couto, but I must agree with @Paulo Zoom, the texture must be more subtle. Another thing I would work on is the border around the image, I don't know, maybe give it a subtle dark 1px border.
Ah, and centre it! :p
3 months ago