I like the second one assuming you rework the color bar across the top a little bit. The top one has more consistency between those color bars and the ribbon color, and that's what I'm wanting in the second one.
I think the color are on the right track, they just are of a different tone/value or something.
Overall it looks good though, I'm excited to see more.
Thanks all for the feedback. I'm leaning towards the second one myself.
@Christopher Site is for a kid-oriented product and the rainbow colors are from their logo. Tried to soften them up but I agree that they aren't in the same family. Working through that one now. See previous: http://drbl.in/36263
Looks great overall — I like the colors on both. Regarding the ribbon, perhaps we've seen enough of those in the past couple years? Another element targeted at kids could work.
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Christian Ross
Round 2.
I feel like I need to preface all of my shots now with, I welcome any and all feedback from the Dribbble community.
almost 2 years ago
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Dave Ruiz
Second one. Looks good.
almost 2 years ago
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Trent Walton
I like bottom / 2nd one as well
almost 2 years ago
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Christopher Meeks
I like the second one assuming you rework the color bar across the top a little bit. The top one has more consistency between those color bars and the ribbon color, and that's what I'm wanting in the second one.
I think the color are on the right track, they just are of a different tone/value or something.
Overall it looks good though, I'm excited to see more.
almost 2 years ago
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Christian Ross
Thanks all for the feedback. I'm leaning towards the second one myself.
@Christopher Site is for a kid-oriented product and the rainbow colors are from their logo. Tried to soften them up but I agree that they aren't in the same family. Working through that one now. See previous: http://drbl.in/36263
almost 2 years ago
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Chris Bowler
Looks great overall — I like the colors on both. Regarding the ribbon, perhaps we've seen enough of those in the past couple years? Another element targeted at kids could work.
almost 2 years ago