I feel that the iMac should be a little bigger, the shadows of the speech bubble reversed (maybe) and in general have a more similar outter stroke on all. Overall they look good of course.
Great start - really into the first three and the CLI one!
In addition to what others have said regarding the chat bubble, I think the gradient on the gear makes it look bubbly instead of 3D when that surface should be flat (maybe a tiny bit textured?). Maybe add some sort of faint dark-to-light gradient on the second fold of the map (or whichever way you want the lighting) to add some more depth/bend to it. Something about the calendar one is throwing me off too. Almost like I want to see a really faded grid where the days go behind the date number.
I like em all! Blah Blah Blah I would rework the settings icon for it seems out of place from the rest. Blah Blah Increase imac size a tad... blah blah and the speech bubble shadows look funny.
1. Overall, they don't feel like a consistant "set". The bubble icon has a bit of a different feel and then the calendar icon has really dark stroked applied. I think they can feel more unified.
2. Right now, I don't like the darker inner stroke used for the bubble icon. It makes it looks like the top of the icon is set into the surface, and the bottom of the icon is popping out of the surface.
3. I LOVE the map icon. It's so so great. I might give those clouds some perspective, though. They seem as if they're floating on the top of the map. Maybe that was your intention?
4. The calendar icon, in general, just feels really wide to me. I like the way the notepad, and browser icon feel. It's nice.
5. I think the colour can be adjusted on the gear icon a bit. The top seems to fade away a bit.
Overall, this is a great first pass, and you still have so much time to improve on all this stuff. Go get em Haziq :)
18 Responses
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Haziq Mir
32px icon set blah blah... First try blah blah....
Blah blah.... Let me know blah blah...
On a serious note, I need critical feedback :)
3 months ago
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Maarten Dijk
Me Gusta! :).
But.. Is it me, or does it looks like if the speech bubble is pressed?
3 months ago
love it!
3 months ago
Chat bubble has a dark inner shadow, you should tone it down.
Rest is dope.
3 months ago
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Avinash Tripathi
very nice start... like all said, the chat is chattering a lot internally :)
3 months ago
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Bruno Felicio
I feel that the iMac should be a little bigger, the shadows of the speech bubble reversed (maybe) and in general have a more similar outter stroke on all. Overall they look good of course.
3 months ago
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Haziq Mir
Gotcha @Bruno Felicio and everybody else. Thank you guys :)
3 months ago
You done good.
3 months ago
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Mandy McClausky
Great start - really into the first three and the CLI one!
In addition to what others have said regarding the chat bubble, I think the gradient on the gear makes it look bubbly instead of 3D when that surface should be flat (maybe a tiny bit textured?). Maybe add some sort of faint dark-to-light gradient on the second fold of the map (or whichever way you want the lighting) to add some more depth/bend to it. Something about the calendar one is throwing me off too. Almost like I want to see a really faded grid where the days go behind the date number.
3 months ago
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Chris Farina
I like em all! Blah Blah Blah I would rework the settings icon for it seems out of place from the rest. Blah Blah Increase imac size a tad... blah blah and the speech bubble shadows look funny.
3 months ago
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Norm
These look great, Im guna have to have a go at making some.
3 months ago
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Charles Riccardi
Hey Haziq :)
Here's some feedback:
1. Overall, they don't feel like a consistant "set". The bubble icon has a bit of a different feel and then the calendar icon has really dark stroked applied. I think they can feel more unified.
2. Right now, I don't like the darker inner stroke used for the bubble icon. It makes it looks like the top of the icon is set into the surface, and the bottom of the icon is popping out of the surface.
3. I LOVE the map icon. It's so so great. I might give those clouds some perspective, though. They seem as if they're floating on the top of the map. Maybe that was your intention?
4. The calendar icon, in general, just feels really wide to me. I like the way the notepad, and browser icon feel. It's nice.
5. I think the colour can be adjusted on the gear icon a bit. The top seems to fade away a bit.
Overall, this is a great first pass, and you still have so much time to improve on all this stuff. Go get em Haziq :)
3 months ago
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Coleman Tharp
Love it :D
3 months ago
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Haziq Mir
@Chris Farina, @charlesriccardi & @Mandy McClausky Thanks for the feedback. Just what I needed :)
Will improve upon the points you mentioned.
TBH, with the speech bubble, I was inspired by the look on the Messages Icon. Duh.
3 months ago
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Muhammad Bilal ☁
great work @Haziq Mir
3 months ago
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Mani
excellent.
3 months ago
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Filipe Varela
Sharp! Great work.
3 months ago
Rebound
32px icons
by Haziq Mir
Coming soon...
Thoughts on this?
BTW, in case you missed, I release two freebies - Calendar Widget and Circular Social Buttons over at CreativeMarket (You'll need to look for it).
Shameless promo:
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about 1 month ago