just my suggestion:
1. the shadow on the clouds is to clean/straight, maybe softer edges are better.
2. the sun with clouds also can be a moon, use the other sun (with sunbeams) for more consistent.
3. I think the contrast Moon to cloud is not enough. A bit darker shadow can help.
4. the rain: maybe is better to cut the long rain(drop) in the middle and change the angle for more dynamic.
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James Cipriano
The beginning of an icon set, any feedback is welcome!
over 1 year ago
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Dennis Covent
The clouds may be a bit lighter? More white?
over 1 year ago
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Yoga Perdana
nice!
over 1 year ago
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Steffen Nørgaard Andersen
Awesome style - Love the high contrast
over 1 year ago
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Ricardo Salazar
Very nice style!
over 1 year ago
good work...
just my suggestion:
1. the shadow on the clouds is to clean/straight, maybe softer edges are better.
2. the sun with clouds also can be a moon, use the other sun (with sunbeams) for more consistent.
3. I think the contrast Moon to cloud is not enough. A bit darker shadow can help.
4. the rain: maybe is better to cut the long rain(drop) in the middle and change the angle for more dynamic.
I hope I could help you
over 1 year ago
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James Cipriano
Thanks for the feedback everyone
@Dennis Covent , I think you're right, the clouds do need to be more white, thanks!
@bjoern maser , I appreciate all the suggestions, I'll definitely try them out!
over 1 year ago
Love these!
about 1 year ago
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Fabio Benedetti
@James Cipriano lovely icons ++
about 1 year ago
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Javier López
Wow. I want this icon set! Did you finish it?
12 months ago
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James Cipriano
@Javier López Thanks for the comment! Unfortunately I haven't finished it yet, no where near done actually :(
12 months ago
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Javier López
I think yo can sell then really well! If is a big set of at least 64 icons or something like that.
12 months ago
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Trent McBride
Very cute! Also agree the clouds could be a little more white. They look a bit too stormy at the moment. Apart from that they're just gorgeous!
12 months ago