The only thing that feels awkward is the little line coming off the "u". I don't know any suggestions on how to fix that, but maybe just fiddle around a bit more there.
This is so beautiful, I really like it. Yea for what Owen said, you could always thin out that final swash a little, just to make sure it's obviously not a letter. I absolutely love the letter interactions everywhere, looks great.
16 Responses
Pro
Floris Voorveld
Working on a printed portfolio/résumé. This early sketch would be the title of the typography section.
3 months ago
Pro
Yassine Bentaieb
This is beautiful Floris, nice work!
3 months ago
Pro
Inka Mathew
Beautiful, Floris. I like how it all fits together.
3 months ago
Great!
3 months ago
Pro
ampersandrew
yes sir! great sketch.
3 months ago
oh SNAP! awesome flow :)
3 months ago
Pro
Floris Voorveld
Thanks for the kind words people :)
3 months ago
Pro
amberr
Phenomenal! Nice play on words and beautiful type! :)
3 months ago
Pro
Breno Bitencourt
You got skills, Floris!
3 months ago
Pro
Kris Todd
I love it!
The only thing that feels awkward is the little line coming off the "u". I don't know any suggestions on how to fix that, but maybe just fiddle around a bit more there.
3 months ago
Pro
Richard de Ruijter
Dit is bizar, Floris. Geweldig werk!
3 months ago
Beautiful sketch!
To me "u" is ok.
3 months ago
Looks great - REALLY great - only problem for me is the swoosh from the final 'e' reads as 'S' so Just My Types.
3 months ago
Pro
Claire Coullon
This is so beautiful, I really like it. Yea for what Owen said, you could always thin out that final swash a little, just to make sure it's obviously not a letter. I absolutely love the letter interactions everywhere, looks great.
3 months ago
Mmmm yes!
2 months ago
Pro
Colin Tierney
i've been missing a lot of good work from you. not sure why i wasn't following you earlier.
2 months ago