Velare Opt. 2

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12 Responses

  1. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    Option number two. Larger attached. Does it bother you that the swash crosses through 'imaginarium'? I thought it bothered me at first but its grown on me. Thoughts?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Trevor Baum Trevor Baum

    This is nice. Is that Burgues Script?

    over 1 year ago

  3. Abby Orlando Sweet Abby Orlando Sweet

    I like it, and the swash doesn't bother me. but there is a teeny bit of a tangent right above the G in Imaginarium. Not bad though.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    @Trevor Baum you got it dude! Good eye. Anything Ale Paul does is gold.

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  5. Scott Sullivan Scott Sullivan

    I like the other one a lot more than this one.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    @Scott Sullivan Fair enough. I had two directions in which I had to design for, and it's up to the client now!

    over 1 year ago

  7. Scott Sullivan Scott Sullivan

    What typeface is velare set in, in #2?

    over 1 year ago

  8. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    @Scott Sullivan see above ^

    over 1 year ago

  9. Scott Sullivan Scott Sullivan

    oops, meant #1!

    over 1 year ago

  10. Pro Evan Huwa Evan Huwa

    No worries @Scott Sullivan its Narziss. Nice face.

    over 1 year ago

  11. Scott Sullivan Scott Sullivan

    The lowercase e is amazing!

    over 1 year ago

  12. Pro Nate Ernst Nate Ernst

    Something about this whole things feels incomplete. I just can't put my finger on it.

    The swash crossing does bother me. It's like the elements feel like they are not cohesive. The colors are pretty nice, but as shapes, they don't fit together.

    over 1 year ago

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