Velare Opt. 2

12 Responses

1. Pro Evan Huwa

   Option number two. Larger attached. Does it bother you that the swash crosses through 'imaginarium'? I thought it bothered me at first but its grown on me. Thoughts?

   3 months ago

2. Trevor Baum

   This is nice. Is that Burgues Script?

   3 months ago

3. Abby Orlando

   I like it, and the swash doesn't bother me. but there is a teeny bit of a tangent right above the G in Imaginarium. Not bad though.

   3 months ago

4. Pro Evan Huwa

   @Trevor Baum you got it dude! Good eye. Anything Ale Paul does is gold.

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   3 months ago

5. Scott Sullivan

   I like the other one a lot more than this one.

   3 months ago

6. Pro Evan Huwa

   @Scott Sullivan Fair enough. I had two directions in which I had to design for, and it's up to the client now!

   3 months ago

7. Scott Sullivan

   What typeface is velare set in, in #2?

   3 months ago

8. Pro Evan Huwa

   @Scott Sullivan see above ^

   3 months ago

9. Scott Sullivan

   oops, meant #1!

   3 months ago

10. Pro Evan Huwa

    No worries @Scott Sullivan its Narziss. Nice face.

    3 months ago

11. Scott Sullivan

    The lowercase e is amazing!

    3 months ago

12. Nate Ernst

    Something about this whole things feels incomplete. I just can't put my finger on it.

    The swash crossing does bother me. It's like the elements feel like they are not cohesive. The colors are pretty nice, but as shapes, they don't fit together.

    3 months ago