Option number two. Larger attached. Does it bother you that the swash crosses through 'imaginarium'? I thought it bothered me at first but its grown on me. Thoughts?
Something about this whole things feels incomplete. I just can't put my finger on it.
The swash crossing does bother me. It's like the elements feel like they are not cohesive. The colors are pretty nice, but as shapes, they don't fit together.
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Evan Huwa
Option number two. Larger attached. Does it bother you that the swash crosses through 'imaginarium'? I thought it bothered me at first but its grown on me. Thoughts?
over 1 year ago
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Trevor Baum
This is nice. Is that Burgues Script?
over 1 year ago
I like it, and the swash doesn't bother me. but there is a teeny bit of a tangent right above the G in Imaginarium. Not bad though.
over 1 year ago
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Evan Huwa
@Trevor Baum you got it dude! Good eye. Anything Ale Paul does is gold.
over 1 year ago
I like the other one a lot more than this one.
over 1 year ago
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Evan Huwa
@Scott Sullivan Fair enough. I had two directions in which I had to design for, and it's up to the client now!
over 1 year ago
What typeface is velare set in, in #2?
over 1 year ago
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Evan Huwa
@Scott Sullivan see above ^
over 1 year ago
oops, meant #1!
over 1 year ago
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Evan Huwa
No worries @Scott Sullivan its Narziss. Nice face.
over 1 year ago
The lowercase e is amazing!
over 1 year ago
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Nate Ernst
Something about this whole things feels incomplete. I just can't put my finger on it.
The swash crossing does bother me. It's like the elements feel like they are not cohesive. The colors are pretty nice, but as shapes, they don't fit together.
over 1 year ago