Interested?

13 Responses

1. Josh Laincz

   Thoughts?

   3 months ago

2. Pro Alexandre Deschamps

   Looks great but a bit hard to read in my opinion. The background is very busy and the type is kinda thin.

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   3 months ago

3. Pro Alex Toth

   I think it looks good but I think the type is a little too light imo. I would make it just a bit heavier.

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   3 months ago

4. Pro Zach Roszczewski

   Lovin' that light texture

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   3 months ago

5. Josh Laincz

   Thanks guys. I agree, although I was messing with some bolder typefaces, but I felt super-thin worked best. I was going for a bit of a blended / faded look and intended for it to be very washed out. I appreciate the comments (:

   3 months ago

6. Josh Laincz

   Thanks @Zach Roszczewski!

   3 months ago

7. Pro Lucio Bracamontes

   Love the grays!

   It bothers me that the horizontal line isn't equally spaced from Interested? and the button.

   I think if you make the background a bit lighter, the thin font will be easier to read.

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   3 months ago

8. Josh Laincz

   Thanks for the comments @Lucio Bracamontes.

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   3 months ago

9. Pro Nick Jarvis

   Josh, now this is just my initial thought. but what if you had the plane's nose heading skyward? this current angle makes me think of it crashing into the city.. Plus I think the plane heading skyward makes more sense.

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   3 months ago

10. Josh Laincz

    Thanks @Nick - let's pretend it's landing (:

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    3 months ago

11. Pro Nick Jarvis

    fair enough

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    3 months ago

12. Pro Kyle Ruane

    Love the style & colors. The text doesn't quite stand out, but I'm thinking that the dark, foggy, mysterious look may be what makes it so interesting. Not sure if altering the text would change that.

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    3 months ago

13. Josh Laincz

    Thanks @Kyle, I appreciate the comments. It was strange, the more prominent I made the type the less I liked it.

    3 months ago