Possibly an unfilled box similar to the monitor below with the dark "t" or ect. Or possibly for something super sexy, a unfilled box with a light gradient running up. Leaving the top half to appear "transparent". Just a thought.
the execution of the layout is nice, but personally i think the font choice is really weak and the end product would jump off the page if some nicer fonts were applied. : )
Not sure how I feel about the uppercase letters/links, not sure if it is the kerning or the font in general, they just don't seem to fit... Hope that helps, keep on cranking out some amazing work!
The font size for the social sites are a bit large, they look more like a subhead. Also, maybe make the social icons look like the screen icon next to Work With Us so everything looks consistent?
Hey Caleb, I wonder to know how can you invite friend to become "player"? (Im sorry to ask this by comment, but I just dont get it how to invite people...)
@Selim Cherif, hey Selim, the way it works is Dribbble sends out draft invites on a fairly regular basis. I'd love to check out your friend's work when I have invites available! Keep us all posted, and Im sure someone will be able to hook him up :)
@Kevin Burr The white icons could be nice, but I also think muted, metallic color could work as well. I really liked the frosted look, but I'm not crazy about the font choice. Futura is a bit over done in my opinion and I don't like the super-light all caps font, especially its proportion next to the icons. The frosting is great though!
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Another preliminary design for a client site. Thoughts?
over 1 year ago
I like it a lot.. but why are the social media buttons so strong gradiented?
over 1 year ago
Looks nice, but i agree with @Maarten Dijk On the social icons
over 1 year ago
I really love this look.
Possibly an unfilled box similar to the monitor below with the dark "t" or ect. Or possibly for something super sexy, a unfilled box with a light gradient running up. Leaving the top half to appear "transparent". Just a thought.
Keep it up Caleb.
over 1 year ago
I like it!! But I agree with @Maarten Dijk too
over 1 year ago
the execution of the layout is nice, but personally i think the font choice is really weak and the end product would jump off the page if some nicer fonts were applied. : )
over 1 year ago
I like too. But, I social bottoms is in gradient style?
over 1 year ago
Not sure how I feel about the uppercase letters/links, not sure if it is the kerning or the font in general, they just don't seem to fit... Hope that helps, keep on cranking out some amazing work!
over 1 year ago
The font size for the social sites are a bit large, they look more like a subhead. Also, maybe make the social icons look like the screen icon next to Work With Us so everything looks consistent?
over 1 year ago
@Maarten Dijk @Gil Huybrecht @scottrainy @Manuel Masia @Pete White @Daniel Campos @Lucio Bracamontes @Kyle Lambert you guys are awesome! thx for the suggestions big time. a rebound will be in place shortly. thx for taking the time to critique :)
over 1 year ago
Hey Caleb, I wonder to know how can you invite friend to become "player"? (Im sorry to ask this by comment, but I just dont get it how to invite people...)
over 1 year ago
@Selim Cherif, hey Selim, the way it works is Dribbble sends out draft invites on a fairly regular basis. I'd love to check out your friend's work when I have invites available! Keep us all posted, and Im sure someone will be able to hook him up :)
over 1 year ago
It looks incredible. Although I, too, might suggest making the social icons match the monitor icon below or something like @scottrainy suggested.
over 1 year ago
@David Hubler ^ wholeheartedly agree!
over 1 year ago
Try it :D haha
No problem on the crit, it is what this site is for. Frankly, I wish everybody contributed a little more feedback.
over 1 year ago
^ agreed
over 1 year ago
Love this whole frosted look you've got going on. Not sure if that's intentional. Did you try white icons?
over 1 year ago
@Kevin Burr ooo good idea. I did white on the previous shot. great idea, Kevin.
over 1 year ago
@Kevin Burr The white icons could be nice, but I also think muted, metallic color could work as well. I really liked the frosted look, but I'm not crazy about the font choice. Futura is a bit over done in my opinion and I don't like the super-light all caps font, especially its proportion next to the icons. The frosting is great though!
over 1 year ago
Great feeling:)
about 1 year ago
Looks like frosted glass over the background! Beautiful!
9 months ago