Newest version of the box, thanks to all the helpful feedback we got on previous shots. We changed the texture to a cardboard box texture because the dark green leather was a little too fancy and didn't quite match the rest of the design stuff.
This is looking great. Love the cardboard & tape textures.
I agree with @Joel Helin though, the paperclip seems a little off, as do the numbers on the chart. Super nice though :)
I think the shadow on the bottom of the lid is a bit off. Also, is the perspective of the paper clip a bit off as well? Other than that, it looks really great.
I like it at first sight, but then somehow every element looks 'fake', like they are just piled up one onto another. Maybe all the edges are just too sharp? The right face of the cardboard seems surprisingly detached of the rest of the box. I think there is too much space between the sheets of paper.
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Yummygum
Newest version of the box, thanks to all the helpful feedback we got on previous shots. We changed the texture to a cardboard box texture because the dark green leather was a little too fancy and didn't quite match the rest of the design stuff.
4 months ago
What if you would place a few papers next to the box? Or would that be a little too "messy / unorganized"?
4 months ago
This took it to a whole new level.
4 months ago
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Yummygum
Hmm that's not a bad suggestion @Jeroen Hofman, we might suggest it to our client, see what they think :)
4 months ago
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Joel Helin
The paperclip looks strange on the paper and I must say that the box is absolutely stunning!
4 months ago
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Francesco Improta
So perfect!
4 months ago
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Ivo Ruijters
This is dribbblelicious!
4 months ago
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Hamish
This is looking great. Love the cardboard & tape textures.
I agree with @Joel Helin though, the paperclip seems a little off, as do the numbers on the chart. Super nice though :)
4 months ago
what the hell, this is amazing
4 months ago
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Marvin Kennis
This is great! Way better than the last one :)
4 months ago
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Yummygum
@Hamish @Joel Helin haha you're right, paperclip does look pretty weird, we'll fix the perspective on that, thanks!
4 months ago
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Haziq Mir
*le jaw drops and touches the floor
4 months ago
really nice! but the numbers of the graph must also be corrected
4 months ago
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Danny Saltaren
genial!
4 months ago
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Yassine Bentaieb
Nice work, I especially like the receipt and the tape!
4 months ago
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Thibaut Ninove
Much better. I love it. :)
4 months ago
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Rodrigo Grundig
@Yummygum Now that's the right perspective :D
Great job!
4 months ago
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Justin L.
Wow, that is all.
4 months ago
I think the shadow on the bottom of the lid is a bit off. Also, is the perspective of the paper clip a bit off as well? Other than that, it looks really great.
4 months ago
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jonathan olsen
Nice work!
4 months ago
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Jari Sanders
The perspective of the paper and the graphics look are a bit off.
Take a look at this: http://cl.ly/E7dN Get it?
4 months ago
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Corey Haggard
shit yeah!!
4 months ago
I like it at first sight, but then somehow every element looks 'fake', like they are just piled up one onto another. Maybe all the edges are just too sharp? The right face of the cardboard seems surprisingly detached of the rest of the box. I think there is too much space between the sheets of paper.
4 months ago
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Mani
great job.
4 months ago
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Gadzhi Kharkharov
This is great.
4 months ago