I could use some ideas or opinions on what I should do to clean up this logo that I decided I am going to continue using. I feel it doesn't sit well by itself. I'm not sure if it needs to be confined in a shape or what to do to refine the ends of the letters.
Not really sure what you could do with it. I agree that those terminals are kind of awkward by itself. I know it's cliche' but maybe try it within a circle. I think the swash of the "o" could be thickened out like the weight of the terminal of the d.
@matt rossi Thanks for the kind words. Yeah I can see that, and I've struggled with that when making it. What I like about it is that it has a very natural artistic feel. Unordinary, but noticeable. I might be able to adjust the lower oval on the 'd' and make it more round to keep it from looking like a 'j'.
@Jake Dugard I tried a circle before... maybe I just need to revisit it. But those terminals do just look odd. I will adjust the swatch on the 'o'. Nice catch.
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I could use some ideas or opinions on what I should do to clean up this logo that I decided I am going to continue using. I feel it doesn't sit well by itself. I'm not sure if it needs to be confined in a shape or what to do to refine the ends of the letters.
4 months ago
Pro
matt rossi
i'm diggin it, though i didn't get the 'd' at first, looked like more of a 'J'
love the colors though
4 months ago
Pro
Jake Dugard
Not really sure what you could do with it. I agree that those terminals are kind of awkward by itself. I know it's cliche' but maybe try it within a circle. I think the swash of the "o" could be thickened out like the weight of the terminal of the d.
4 months ago
@matt rossi Thanks for the kind words. Yeah I can see that, and I've struggled with that when making it. What I like about it is that it has a very natural artistic feel. Unordinary, but noticeable. I might be able to adjust the lower oval on the 'd' and make it more round to keep it from looking like a 'j'.
@Jake Dugard I tried a circle before... maybe I just need to revisit it. But those terminals do just look odd. I will adjust the swatch on the 'o'. Nice catch.
Thanks guys for the help.
4 months ago
Rebound
Opd Logo v2
by Jared Hardwick
So this is based off my previous version. Still not 100% sure, but welcome any opinions.
4 months ago