Okay I have been working on this for some time now trying to come up with the perfect combo of items to combine to get the logo I was looking for, please give me some feedback! Good, bad, whatever, I'll take it and appreciate it. Thanks in advance.
Looks great Mike - great sketching and shading. Struggled to read Eightone, but I guess you'll fix that when you vector it. Sweet! (Just thinking about BBQ now...)
I had the same question about the fork. I really dig the shading on the brush / pencil and on the cross. The only thing that stands out as a little off to me is the "." after the 1. But then again, I'm not sure that you can do without it either. Altogether, it's some very great work.
@Bo Lane - the "." as you say is me deciding weather or not to add the bottom cross part of the 1 if that makes sense, not sure if it will look good like that or not. I guess you have to know me to get the fork, not sure how to make that make sense to people right off the bat but maybe it doesn't need to, and that would keep it a convo starter?? thoughts?
@Jonas Strandell thx bro! - but I am far from making anyone look or feel that way, just trying to get better, word!
@Andy Hall Hall thx bro! I think sketching is VITAL for any artist to get there thoughts down and refine their piece. @Von Glitschka would agree with me...lol!
looks great Mike. i dont think you need to add any other elements. i would say make a choice between pencil or brush. it looks a bit strange seeing both combined.
maybe set the top of the brush (if you keep it) behind the top banner?
@Brandon Moore cool! thx! What do you think. I dont do much painting, but i thought it conveyed artist well so that why its there...lol! And I will have to try that with the banner, should the fork be behind as well? 'Preciate all the feedback fellas.
you know looking at it again i think the top banner should be behind everything. its kind of hard to say without seeing 3 versions of it next to each other. but now im thinking your top to back order should go: pencil, fork, cross, banners.
i think you should go with a pencil, its more specific to you and the message i think stays the same.
You know I'm into all that heavy emblem stuff, so it's obvious that I love it.
I would tho suggest, to maybe skip the bible reference at the top, just because you already have the cross in the middle to represent the christian element and maybe exchange the text to "Estb. xxxx" or something of the likes.
And I'm not saying that because I'm a non-religious person. Just for the cause of balance :)
@Emir Ayouni | Growcase| Growcase I was waiting for you to comment!! Thx for the props bro! But the verse it important to me so I dont want to drop it. Josua 24:!5 say..."As for me and my house we will SERVE the Lord." So when this badge goes on a shirt or what ever I want folks to know that. Other than that is there anything else you would change to make it better? I am ready to do a final sketch and get this thing rockin'. Also color suggestions from you would be much appreciated!!
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Mike Jones
Okay I have been working on this for some time now trying to come up with the perfect combo of items to combine to get the logo I was looking for, please give me some feedback! Good, bad, whatever, I'll take it and appreciate it. Thanks in advance.
4 months ago
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Andy Hall
Looks nice fella, one question what does the fork represent?
Can't wait to see it finished.
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Andy the fork represents my love of cooking, eating, food & BBQ! Thx bro! I am excited to see what comes about...
4 months ago
Looks great Mike - great sketching and shading. Struggled to read Eightone, but I guess you'll fix that when you vector it. Sweet! (Just thinking about BBQ now...)
4 months ago
I had the same question about the fork. I really dig the shading on the brush / pencil and on the cross. The only thing that stands out as a little off to me is the "." after the 1. But then again, I'm not sure that you can do without it either. Altogether, it's some very great work.
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Owen Jones thx bro - yeah i its a dirty rough sketch will be much cleaner after tweaks and vectorizing. & I never stop thinking about BBQ!! haha..
4 months ago
Damn you Mike! Stop the awesomeness you make the rest of us look like sad little knob heads ;-)
4 months ago
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Andy Hall
Got it, looking at your other shots of badge designs you have done, so going on that I can confidently say this will look amazing when finished.
Great sketch work to, I know so many designers who don't sketch enough and don't see the point, such a great skill to have to get our ideas down.
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Bo Lane - the "." as you say is me deciding weather or not to add the bottom cross part of the 1 if that makes sense, not sure if it will look good like that or not. I guess you have to know me to get the fork, not sure how to make that make sense to people right off the bat but maybe it doesn't need to, and that would keep it a convo starter?? thoughts?
@Jonas Strandell thx bro! - but I am far from making anyone look or feel that way, just trying to get better, word!
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Andy Hall Hall thx bro! I think sketching is VITAL for any artist to get there thoughts down and refine their piece. @Von Glitschka would agree with me...lol!
4 months ago
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Brandon Moore
looks great Mike. i dont think you need to add any other elements. i would say make a choice between pencil or brush. it looks a bit strange seeing both combined.
maybe set the top of the brush (if you keep it) behind the top banner?
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Brandon Moore cool! thx! What do you think. I dont do much painting, but i thought it conveyed artist well so that why its there...lol! And I will have to try that with the banner, should the fork be behind as well? 'Preciate all the feedback fellas.
4 months ago
thats some crazy details you got going on there buddy!!! That pencil at the bottom deserves a shot of its own man!
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@fabio perez thx yo! I might just do that here in a bit...
4 months ago
SOOOOO awesome! lovin' the bibe verse!
4 months ago
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Guillermo Herrera
Sweet! love the endings of the cross
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Kyle Thanks bro - one of my life verses!
@Guillermo Herrera - yeah it added some shape to it fo sho! thx bro!
4 months ago
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Brandon Moore
you know looking at it again i think the top banner should be behind everything. its kind of hard to say without seeing 3 versions of it next to each other. but now im thinking your top to back order should go: pencil, fork, cross, banners.
i think you should go with a pencil, its more specific to you and the message i think stays the same.
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Brandon Moore I think that is a rad idea, will be doing that! thx a million for all the feedback bro!
4 months ago
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Emir Ayouni | Growcase
This looks so awesome Mike.
You know I'm into all that heavy emblem stuff, so it's obvious that I love it.
I would tho suggest, to maybe skip the bible reference at the top, just because you already have the cross in the middle to represent the christian element and maybe exchange the text to "Estb. xxxx" or something of the likes.
And I'm not saying that because I'm a non-religious person. Just for the cause of balance :)
Anyway, nice one bro!
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Emir Ayouni | Growcase| Growcase I was waiting for you to comment!! Thx for the props bro! But the verse it important to me so I dont want to drop it. Josua 24:!5 say..."As for me and my house we will SERVE the Lord." So when this badge goes on a shirt or what ever I want folks to know that. Other than that is there anything else you would change to make it better? I am ready to do a final sketch and get this thing rockin'. Also color suggestions from you would be much appreciated!!
4 months ago
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Mani
amazing.
4 months ago
How 'bout this color palette: black-white-pms427-pms512-pms5405-pms540. I think you might want more limited color but take a look at them.
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
@John Beatty I will take a look when i get to that stage and check these out! Thx bro!!
4 months ago
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Mike Jones
Thoughts on old school eraser top verses regular eraser for the pencil, nixing the paint brush?
4 months ago