Just for funsies.
Love to hear some criticism, this sort of thing isn't my strong suit.
4 months ago
Frankly … it looks unbalanced. The letters alone could be the logo. The shapes around the letters are too complicated. Why is the lower shape so wide? And why are the letters not in the vertical center?
I would try to make it simpler and come up with a proper way to geometrically compose the logo, maybe using only basic shapes. This might give you an idea: http://blog.spoongraphics.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/logo-design/balanced.png
It’s the first example I found after doing a quick search. The whole post is not that bad, too: http://blog.spoongraphics.co.uk/articles/a-guide-to-creating-professional-quality-logo-designs
Thanks for the feedback, I'll have to do some more work on it. Looks like that article'll be pretty helpful, too.
Just to give a bit of context, this was an attempt to revamp the Toronto TTC logo, http://stevedarkwood.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/600px-ttc_logo.gif but obviously more work is needed.
Thanks!
way better haha
2 months ago
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Zach Forrester
Just for funsies.
Love to hear some criticism, this sort of thing isn't my strong suit.
4 months ago
Pro
Reimar Servas
Frankly … it looks unbalanced. The letters alone could be the logo. The shapes around the letters are too complicated. Why is the lower shape so wide? And why are the letters not in the vertical center?
I would try to make it simpler and come up with a proper way to geometrically compose the logo, maybe using only basic shapes. This might give you an idea: http://blog.spoongraphics.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/logo-design/balanced.png
It’s the first example I found after doing a quick search. The whole post is not that bad, too: http://blog.spoongraphics.co.uk/articles/a-guide-to-creating-professional-quality-logo-designs
4 months ago
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Zach Forrester
Thanks for the feedback, I'll have to do some more work on it. Looks like that article'll be pretty helpful, too.
Just to give a bit of context, this was an attempt to revamp the Toronto TTC logo, http://stevedarkwood.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/600px-ttc_logo.gif but obviously more work is needed.
Thanks!
4 months ago
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Marc
way better haha
2 months ago