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  1. Avatar3 Daniel Campos (Anora Campo)

    Yeah David, I like this. But, have you tried some font typography? Your letter is good, but this can be better with other choices. What about it?

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    4 months ago

  2. Pro Avatar David Pache

    Thanks for the comment @Daniel. I have always found it much more compelling to create the entirety of the solution as it allows for more efficient harmonization between type and symbol.

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    4 months ago

  3. Pro Breno5 Breno Bitencourt

    The concept behind this one is simply amazing, @David.
    I just think you could simplify the mark a bit reducing the squares numbers. Just about to get a better balance between mark and type.

    4 months ago

  4. Pro Avatar David Pache

    Thanks @Breno, didn't know of these @ functions before.

    The concept did start out a little simpler but it just wasn't dynamic enough. It can be seen in the attachment.

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    4 months ago

  5. Pro Breno5 Breno Bitencourt

    Yes, man i see it! great start and a spetacular come up. Congrats!

    4 months ago

  6. Pro Avatar Tony Lane

    What's Yundi? I think I like the previous as it has nice balance & symmetry between baseline and cap height.

    4 months ago

  7. Pro Avatar David Pache

    @Tony they specialize in augmented digital consulting. I did like it too but think it challenges slightly too much.

    4 months ago

  8. Avatar3 Daniel Campos (Anora Campo)

    @David if this is a strategic choice, I support you. Congratz for shot. I'm waiting for new images :)

    4 months ago

  9. Avatar_2_80 Phil Zelnar

    For the symbol, wondering if you might want to work from the bluer end of the spectrum towards red? Only mention this b.c cooler colors recede, so having the warmer red closer to the type would help to pull the eye from left to right. Just a thought.

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