Hey Dennis, looks great man. Really caught my eye.
If I were to suggest any tweaks I might be tempted to do some more work on the shapes of the tails which currently don't seem quite right.
I had a similar experience with a logo designer a few years ago. His mark looked a lot like one of mine, but he had never seen my work. The client is actually going with the badge idea with the whale fluke in it. I'm actually wrapping it up and presenting color options at this point. I'll share it soon.
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Dennis Salvatier
This is for Pacific Nature Tours, a San Diego based whale-watching tour.
I have two more comps to go with this one, but this is the one that feels like I'm missing something. I could use some feedback.
4 months ago
the head of the whale seems to lack definition. maybe some more white markings?
4 months ago
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Dennis Salvatier
Hmmm
4 months ago
Hey Dennis, looks great man. Really caught my eye.
If I were to suggest any tweaks I might be tempted to do some more work on the shapes of the tails which currently don't seem quite right.
4 months ago
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Louis D. Wiyono <Wizmaya>
That round dolphin's shape is sure similar with our old Bebocean logo. Might havta alter it a bit, mate. ;)
4 months ago
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Dennis Salvatier
Wow that does look almost exact. The client went with another comp so this one is dead.
4 months ago
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Louis D. Wiyono <Wizmaya>
haha, it does, right? Definitely caught my eyes.
Kinda curious about the progress. Hope you'll nail this one soon!
4 months ago
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Dennis Salvatier
Louis, you can see where my original thoughts were going with my original shot here.
http://dribbble.com/shots/410581-Logo-Sketch-Phase-WIP
I had a similar experience with a logo designer a few years ago. His mark looked a lot like one of mine, but he had never seen my work. The client is actually going with the badge idea with the whale fluke in it. I'm actually wrapping it up and presenting color options at this point. I'll share it soon.
4 months ago
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Pacific Nature Tours logo [color option]
by Dennis Salvatier
The client decided to go with a different comp and now were looking at color options. This one is my favorite just because it feels bold and timeless.
4 months ago