JCP Bird

10 Responses

1. Pro Bobby McKenna

   Kinda diggin' this so far. Thoughts on those rounded edges where the three boxes meet?

   almost 2 years ago

2. Dan Higbie

   I really like this. I dig the rounded corners, and the spacing of each box. Also is the icon in the birds bubble anything? I keep picturing an apeture shape in there.

   almost 2 years ago

3. Pro Bobby McKenna

   Realllly want to avoid the whole aperture thing. It's been done to death, if you ask me.

   The bird references the old "Smile and look at the birdie!" line. And the shape is a little flash.

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   almost 2 years ago

4. David Sizemore

   I think the speech balloon should have a piece of cheese in it.

   Also, I AM NOT SERIOUS JEEZ.

   The rounded edges where the boxes meet are good; I think they work. The boxes not lining up (the bottom of the gray w/the bottom of the black) is throwing me a bit. Might not be an issue for others, though. I do like how the right boxes line up w/the bird's wings and feet.

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   almost 2 years ago

5. Noah Armstrong

   not gonna lie... kind of like the cheese idea...

   I think the flash is the way to go though. I immediately got the concept. Well done.

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   almost 2 years ago

6. Pro Bobby McKenna

   Thanks, Noah and David. It's not quite there, but it's close.

   almost 2 years ago

7. Dan Higbie

   @Bobby, I totally understand on the aperture idea. I think the flash is the only thing that I don't immediately recognize. Otherwise the it's absolutely lovely.

   PS. You are my favorite dribbbler.

   almost 2 years ago

8. Pro Bobby McKenna

   I think I'm okay with people not "getting it" right away. And thanks!

   almost 2 years ago

9. Pro Jay Fanelli

   +1 for the cheese. In fact, toss out the flash and the bird, and just have the cheese.

   J. Clayton Photography. Here's this cheese™.

   Man, I'm tired.

   almost 2 years ago

10. Mads Burcharth

    Good stuff, Mr. McKenna.

    almost 2 years ago