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4charter Re-Design V2

by Dan Edwards Pro Feb 2, 2012
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4charter_teaser 4Charter Re-Design Re-Designing http://4charter.co.uk and sharing my progress here and over at Forrst http://forrst.com/posts/4Charter_Re_Design_v_2_0-deX Full size image attac... February 02, 2012

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  1. Pro Dan2 Dan Edwards

    Just re-jigged the welcome area, feedback welcomed :)

    4 months ago

  2. Ae_profile_pic_big Andrew Edwards

    This might scupper your plans with regards to the carousel area, but it would be really nice for the main image to have a bit of breakout - maybe the top of the mast poking out of the frame, or (depending on the size of the image you have) the front of the boat could be breaking through the waves and out of the frame - or perhaps both. Loving the clean look, just think it could do with a bit more of a focus. The welcome text might need a bit of change of pace, either way too much text or bold up the top two lines, give it some hierarchy.

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  3. Pro Dan2 Dan Edwards

    Thanks @Andrew Edwards appreciate the feedback!

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    4 months ago

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