I like the main font, not sure if the subtitle is working (perhaps a little smaller and with more line-height). But what I really feel isn't working is the Character, it really falls short next to your usual stuff.
Guessing here: May you be falling pray of your website design?
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Josh Cleland
I'm working on a new branding for my business. Thoughts? I'm really asking for feedback. Don't hold back (as long as it's constructive).
over 1 year ago
I like the main font, not sure if the subtitle is working (perhaps a little smaller and with more line-height). But what I really feel isn't working is the Character, it really falls short next to your usual stuff.
Guessing here: May you be falling pray of your website design?
over 1 year ago
I say either tackle your Logo as a logo or as a Cartoon.
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over 1 year ago
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Josh Cleland
@Mac Thanks! I really like those suggestions. That first one really has some promise.
over 1 year ago