'K' mark exploration for a web app, specializing in finding specific pet foods. Still at the very early stages.
Any and all sorts of feedback is highly appreciated as always.
Thanks in advance, dear Dribbble friends.
over 1 year ago
I like the colors, the letter and the sack.
Nice shadow and background.
Very nice Emir!
My only feedback would be the shadow placements.
on the 2 bottom "ears" I would play around with those, maybe even take the one on the shadow part off hinting there is no light there.
Love the feel and colors to this. My only thing is, the very first impression, without reading your 1st comment, I saw a pillow. But hey, maybe im just sleep deprived :)
Emir, seriously .. how do you made this texture? ... just noise-effect??
diggin' it bro! First thought before I read your post, was bag of flour? for some reason. Anyway rad as usual!
Though without knowing what the brand is, my first thought is that it's a pillow store.
Looking cool Emir. Simplicity is king, you know that ;)
Maybe try a nice ole knot on top of your bag mate!
Looks awesome Emir, maybe try a faint burlap texture on the bag itself?
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looking good man
Bring on the noise!
Yeah I love it, but my first thought was a bag or flour or a pillow. Maybe kill the 2 knots at the bottom and your left w/ some dog ears (albeit some very small ears). Great work though.
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Its a flour sack !!!! :) I love flour sack animations
@Gunder Bruun Eriksen - *sigh*
Ooh good times good times:
While I most definitely do not agree with your "ugliest letter in the alphabet" tag, I like this a lot! It looks immediately like a bag to me, I love how it acts both as an illustration and a container shape for the letter equally.
Very nicely drawn 'K' too, it looks fantastic in that heavy weight and the softly rounded edges are a good touch. The only thing that stood out to me a little was the slight curve on the lower diagonal. Have you thought about curving the outer stroke of the leg to match? (Or making it straight so that it matches the top diagonal). Anyway, curious to see where you go with this!
@Claire Coullon - The quality of the feedback I receive from you is beyond excellent. I can never thank you enough!
It's funny, I'm not a typographer by any means, haha. But I've been inspired lately to make some custom lettering for a couple of projects and both you and @Simon Ålander pointed out the same thing about the "K", so I will definitely try out some options for that!
The bag will be scrapped tho, due to the amount of "Flour Sack" comments, it's obviously not portraying a bag of Dog/Pet Food properly ;) But we're on to a couple of new concepts that's in the works as we speak, so you know I'll keep you updated!
Sounds good! Yea I think the custom letter was an excellent idea here, it really contributes to the distinctive, unique look. Looking forward to seeing some new concepts!
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