I like the simplicity of this version. The space between Two, Mile and Ash looks a bit big to me - it really punctuates the words, which is a little distracting.
I have created another version with the tree, as the client is keen to see it back. I've used a different (more simplified) tree that works better when scaled down. I've also reduced the spacing between 'Two', 'Mile' and 'Ash'.
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Matalin Hatchard
You know who the brand is in this one. I like the strength given the to the ESTD date - shows the trust strongly. Have they given up on the tree?
4 months ago
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Andy Owen
I like the simplicity of this version. The space between Two, Mile and Ash looks a bit big to me - it really punctuates the words, which is a little distracting.
4 months ago
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Richard Wiggins
Matalin: Not sure about the tree at the moment. May bring it back but experimenting at the moment.
Andy: Thanks and now you've said it the spacing does look a little big. I'll take a look at that.
4 months ago
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Two Mile Ash Dental Practice - logo 3b
by Richard Wiggins
4 months ago
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Richard Wiggins
I have created another version with the tree, as the client is keen to see it back. I've used a different (more simplified) tree that works better when scaled down. I've also reduced the spacing between 'Two', 'Mile' and 'Ash'.
4 months ago