Very nice, I like this a lot - the format, colours, typography are all just excellent. One small suggestion: have you tried optically equal spacing between the info lines? Right now, the gap below the 'CEO' line feels a little strange compared to the gap between phone number and email.
Looking at it again, I think it's because it looks like the spacing should be equal but isn't (if it's not meant to be equal, I think a bigger distinction could look better). Anyway, just some thoughts - looking really good regardless!
@Claire Coullon You're absolutely right about the spacing. I went for Title/subtitle/credentials, but never really made a decision about making the separation clear or not. I actually think they should stick together now since it's really the typography contrast that symbolizes the separation.
Yeah good call, I think it'll really add to the cohesiveness of the whole design too. Just looking at the attachment again, I really like it. Reminds me a bit of typeface specimens, which is awesome. Nice work again!
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Stéphane Reverdy
Contender for the business cards I'm designing for Gigboard.
Ideal version is letterpressed on white-blue-white sandwiched paper.
FULL VIEW FTW
4 months ago
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Claire Coullon
Very nice, I like this a lot - the format, colours, typography are all just excellent. One small suggestion: have you tried optically equal spacing between the info lines? Right now, the gap below the 'CEO' line feels a little strange compared to the gap between phone number and email.
Looking at it again, I think it's because it looks like the spacing should be equal but isn't (if it's not meant to be equal, I think a bigger distinction could look better). Anyway, just some thoughts - looking really good regardless!
4 months ago
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Stéphane Reverdy
@Claire Coullon You're absolutely right about the spacing. I went for Title/subtitle/credentials, but never really made a decision about making the separation clear or not. I actually think they should stick together now since it's really the typography contrast that symbolizes the separation.
4 months ago
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Claire Coullon
Yeah good call, I think it'll really add to the cohesiveness of the whole design too. Just looking at the attachment again, I really like it. Reminds me a bit of typeface specimens, which is awesome. Nice work again!
4 months ago
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Stéphane Reverdy
@Claire Coullon Once again, your comments are deeply appreciated. Thank you :)
4 months ago