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1. Pro Michael Spitz

   Working on some script exploration for this guy. I'll be coming back to the "&" a bit later on...
   
   Q: Anyone having issues with the 'i' read? I've just been been staring at the thing for too long...

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   over 1 year ago

2. Pro Neil Tasker

   Reads good to me

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   over 1 year ago

3. Pro Jed Bridges

   Killer! It reads fine but might be cool to add a lil notch to imply a dot : ) http://goo.gl/fq2ah

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   over 1 year ago

4. Pro Steve Lowtwait

   I think it reads just fine. My thought was to perhaps create a "blob" as if ink pooled a little more for the dot in the i.

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   over 1 year ago

5. Pro Daniel Keller

   I can read it without problems, love the S... But when I look at the "wi" without the stroke of the S, it could be read as "un"(not that I do, but there's sure ppl who would), not sure if that is an issue since the S is always there... Just make the "i" a bit more readable if that is the case.

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   over 1 year ago

6. Joe Prince

   Looks great man!

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   over 1 year ago

7. Pro Michael Reilly

   The 'i' is perfectly readable, but Daniel's comments are correct – I'd reduce the width of the link between the 'w' & 'i' to lessen the effect.

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   over 1 year ago

8. Pro Nemanja Jovanovic aka Frac...

   instantly readable Michael even in these late hours here ,when my eyes are poor :))
   lovely flow to it!

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   over 1 year ago

9. Pro Dan Matutina

   Love!

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   over 1 year ago

10. Pro Emir Ayouni

    Instantly recognizable to me at least and it looks like black ink making love to a white canvas... typography jungle fever!

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    over 1 year ago

11. Pro Mani

    nice.

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    over 1 year ago

12. Pro Stelian Vasile

    Looks great!

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    over 1 year ago

13. Pro Marcelo Schultz

    Nice type!

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    over 1 year ago

14. Ivan Bobrov

    Awesome work Michael.

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    over 1 year ago

15. Pro Ryan Hamrick

    It's funny, at a smaller size, I was reading it as "Surpe" for a minute, but at the full 400x300, the S-i ligature was a bit more clear. I like Michael's suggestion of thinning the w-i connection to make it look less like an "r". All the forms are sure pretty, though. :)

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    over 1 year ago

16. Pro Rudy Hurtado Global Branding

    Great flow Michael.

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    over 1 year ago

17. Pro Michael Spitz

    @Steve / Jed - Emphasis on the terminal is usually my first inclination as well. I'll play with that, and see if we can resolve it a bit further.

    @Daniel - Thanks bud. Those are essentially my concerns as well. I figure if I can see it, someone else is probably going to see it as well.

    @Michael - Appreciate the suggestion.

    @Emir - Ha! Classic comment.

    @Neil / Joe / Nemanja / Dan / Noptar / Stelian / Marcelo / Ivan / Rudy / Ryan - Greatly appreciated guys!

    over 1 year ago

18. Pro Kevin Burr

    Nope, no issues here with the readability. All those ligatures are sexy too. Nice job, Michael!

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    over 1 year ago

19. Pro Jovan Petrić

    Absolutely readable. Top notch typography.

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    over 1 year ago

20. Cory Say

    Sweet! Simple! Too the point!

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    over 1 year ago

21. Pro Sean Heisler

    Nice!

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    over 1 year ago

22. Pro Michael Spitz

    @Kevin / Jovan / Cory / Sean Thanks a lot guys!

    over 1 year ago

23. Anora Campo

    Reads really good for me. Beautiful shot!

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    over 1 year ago

24. Lee Woodbridge

    reads fine, looks great. grats

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    over 1 year ago

25. Patrick King

    Reads beautifully. I love the weight of it. Fatter than most might attempt. Great work.

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    over 1 year ago