Custom Type

6 Responses

1. Pro Andrew Power

   I need critique on this quick, as I think it might be bad. I don't do a lot of custom type and I feel like everything I do looks wrong. Anyone have anything to say? Is it even readable?

   4 months ago

2. Jacqueline Saik

   Love this. 2 super tiny things I'd adjust.

   The loop on the 't' the sliver of white: I would either close it up (nix it) or make it a bit bigger.

   The spacing between the 'z' & 'a': I'd open it up a tiny bit more.

   4 months ago

3. Pro Andrew Power

   Thanks Jacqueline!

   I've been looking at this way too long, the a is totally too close to the Z

   4 months ago

4. Pro Nathan Trafford

   it's nice there are just some contradictions in it.

   First thing i noticed is that z. why? that sharp point. There are no others in the rest of the design.
   Then the angles of certain things feel not pushed far enough. I love the severity of the angles in the o, e, and loop of the z and i want to see more of it. The P, and the swash underneath it are so rounded and smooth that they confuse my eye when paired with these 'kinked' letters.

   I'd get rid of the loop in the t and just make it the same width as if it were one line. That added thickness of it is a little wonky feeling.

   As mentioned above, the za needs some separation.

   hope this doesn't sound harsh, as i think this has the potential to be a really kickass piece!!

   4 months ago

5. Pro Andrew Power

   No no no, not too harsh! This is exactly what I want, I have no idea what I'm doing!

   4 months ago

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   Potenza Another logo option, it's for a handbag company. Opinions? January 31, 2012

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   Potenza

   by Andrew Power

   Another logo option, it's for a handbag company. Opinions?

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   4 months ago