I like the concept a lot, somehow the digital version isnt as strong as the sketch. I would follow it to a T (book lines, the distance between the tassle and the head, the pointy part of the book coming as the nose) and add a more spacing between the text and the mark.
Also, the sketch looks like an owl, but I don't see it in the digitized version.
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Fabian Marchinko
LearnZillion is a learning platform that combines video lessons, assessments, and progress reporting.
Inspired by the wise old owl, books and open available knowledge. Also a shout out to the teachers apple on the desk from when I was a boy:)))
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The design evoked from this, it just really stuck a cord with me:D
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Sean Farrell
I like the concept a lot, somehow the digital version isnt as strong as the sketch. I would follow it to a T (book lines, the distance between the tassle and the head, the pointy part of the book coming as the nose) and add a more spacing between the text and the mark.
Also, the sketch looks like an owl, but I don't see it in the digitized version.
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Stuart L Crawford
I agree with Sean, the sketch looks much more owlish, the beak on the digital re-draw is a little like an open mouth.
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Fabian Marchinko
Thank guys. I agree...I've over cooked it.
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Trying out a less geometric and more organic approach. What do you guys think of the famed out book pages?
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