This one is much better, lot less cluttered, but I think your type at the bottom could use a bit more space, especially since the type is already pretty heavy and the black bars only add up to it.
I like this one a lot (my vote goes here too!) I agree with Arthur, I'd love to see the type given a bit more space, I really like how it's set though - the composition is really nice and cohesive. Great typeface too of course!
I like this version a lot! It conveys swapping books perfectly! Hmmm perhaps "Book Swap" could be the entire width of the info block with "Philamade" hanging off the corner? Might fill in space too where the blue book is higher up.
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Greg Christman
Another option.
4 months ago
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Dave Bailey
I vote for this one!
4 months ago
What if event title is on the books some how, and details below like you have here. I dig this look overall, but feels like could be tightened up
4 months ago
Hey btw, you've always been a good designer, but you've been killing it lately. Must be fatherhood.
4 months ago
like the arrow/book combo. nice
4 months ago
Hey Greg, I'll see you at the Nomad event. It's just a few blocks from my house. Cool place!
4 months ago
This one is much better, lot less cluttered, but I think your type at the bottom could use a bit more space, especially since the type is already pretty heavy and the black bars only add up to it.
The book->arrows are a nice find!
4 months ago
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Michael Smith
Very cool bro!
4 months ago
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Claire Coullon
I like this one a lot (my vote goes here too!) I agree with Arthur, I'd love to see the type given a bit more space, I really like how it's set though - the composition is really nice and cohesive. Great typeface too of course!
4 months ago
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Chris Streger
It's close, but this one is a little easier for me to read. Both great, good work.
4 months ago
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Steven Darby
I like the prominence of the book illo here better. Nice work.
4 months ago
I like this version a lot! It conveys swapping books perfectly! Hmmm perhaps "Book Swap" could be the entire width of the info block with "Philamade" hanging off the corner? Might fill in space too where the blue book is higher up.
4 months ago
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Greg Christman
@Bridget Good suggestion. I'll give it a whirl and see if it works!
4 months ago