I think all the elements come together nicely in this logo, but one thing that could use some work is the awkward empty space between your name and your titles. I think if that space were closed up tremendously, the logo would be a lot more harmonious, overall.
One thing to consider: try establishing a visual hierarchy with the delivery of your information by calling more attention to your name *first* and *then* to your titles. Even though they physically have the same weight now (which they shouldn't — your name really *should* be more dominant than your titles), it is *optically* smaller because it has much fewer letters than your titles combined.
At any rate, great work. Can't wait to see more of your stuff.
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Art Sevani
My personal badge for personal use, let me know what you guys think, I feel like the font can be different.
over 1 year ago
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Nayla Smith
Nice! I personally think the font works well as it is. Welcome to Dribbble!
over 1 year ago
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Art Sevani
Thanks!
over 1 year ago
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Sarah Zimmerman
I love the A, reminds me of the Assassin's Creed mark.
over 1 year ago
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Aran Jackson
Nice. Welcome to Dribbble Sevani! :-)
over 1 year ago
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Art Sevani
Thank you! more stuff coming soon!
over 1 year ago
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Behzad Ghaffarian
Welcome to the court man :)
over 1 year ago
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Jon Stapp | atomicvibe
I think all the elements come together nicely in this logo, but one thing that could use some work is the awkward empty space between your name and your titles. I think if that space were closed up tremendously, the logo would be a lot more harmonious, overall.
One thing to consider: try establishing a visual hierarchy with the delivery of your information by calling more attention to your name *first* and *then* to your titles. Even though they physically have the same weight now (which they shouldn't — your name really *should* be more dominant than your titles), it is *optically* smaller because it has much fewer letters than your titles combined.
At any rate, great work. Can't wait to see more of your stuff.
over 1 year ago
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Art Sevani
@Jon Stapp very good advice! I will try to revise this to make it better, thanks.
over 1 year ago
Looks very good! Somehow reminds me of The Freemasonry logo, which is a compliment since it's so mysterious :)
over 1 year ago
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Art Sevani
Thank you @Kim Vervuurt , thats very interesting point, now that you mentioned it I see it. )
over 1 year ago
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Dennis Terrey
Love this, very awesome and simple!
about 1 year ago