I dig the right one. My beef with it is the top arrow looks odd. I'd try to get the arrows to be entirely inside of the cloud and maybe square the cloud up a bit, not the circles that make the cloud, but the could's outline itself, that'd make the "refresh" icon look sweet sitting inside there - like this
I think the one on the right will stand up better at smaller sizes. Not sure I like the idea of internalizing the arrows, but the top one does seem off a bit. Perhaps you could find an alternate starting point for it. Looking great, sir.
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Chris Gillis
working on some identity ideas for this lightweight cloud based app. these are two marks I've been working on - what direction do you prefer? thanks.
4 months ago
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Lucas Smith
I dig the right one. My beef with it is the top arrow looks odd. I'd try to get the arrows to be entirely inside of the cloud and maybe square the cloud up a bit, not the circles that make the cloud, but the could's outline itself, that'd make the "refresh" icon look sweet sitting inside there - like this
http://cl.ly/3z2Z1L1I0q3u1A0m0q1p
that is geomicons, but you get the idea...
4 months ago
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Chris Gillis
nice ideas Lucas, thanks for the feedback man.
4 months ago
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Lucas Smith
No worries, procrastinating a little today...
4 months ago
I think the one on the right will stand up better at smaller sizes. Not sure I like the idea of internalizing the arrows, but the top one does seem off a bit. Perhaps you could find an alternate starting point for it. Looking great, sir.
4 months ago
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Chris Gillis
Thanks Adam.
4 months ago